This is good, u should continue

Please continue

shit man i found this story like two hours ago an binged it cant wait for more chapters

Good work sir!

I think he should just use his devil slayer magic, it’s way cooler and his flame make reminds me too much of gray.

Interesting story. Keep it the pairing Natza! Btw, is Natsu still have power of END ? Is Zeref still his brother in your story?

Great chapter

Great chapter

I think natsu and erza should have some alone time and I think natsu should win with one punch or with just his pinky

Thank you for taking my comments and pointers, instead of looking at them as hate. I'm nowhere near the best this website has to offer, but I've done a bit of writing here and there.

Great chapter

Wow this is a pretty interesting idea and a good way to present it i.e. the lack of official timeskips but a summary of the past that isn’t too brief to miss anything. Well done

Good time skip and explaining the things that happen in it

Great chapter

I feel that you should have included another fight between Natsu and Gray, or Laxus even. You skipped alot of important, and integral character development as you set the scene for the rest of the story. You have a really good premise, and a good back story. But there is so much you could do to improve your writing. PLease do not take this as hate, I really love your writing. BUt a fight with Gildarts is worth a flash back, even if they are hard to write. Or even a traumatic memory.