Reviews for Twisted Steel
Jimbotron96 chapter 22 . 8/12
I love this story!
Will Clarke ever get her hidden blade back because that was very useful? Will Clarke get anymore upgrades?
Interesting that you paired Clarke with Raven. Will Clarke remain platonic with Lexa?
Anyways, Awesome story and I'd love to read the sequel.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/17
Really looking forward to sequel
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
Hello, is this still going to be updated sometime soon?
Guest chapter 22 . 3/13
This is a great story. Could you keep it going please
Dark Yellow Dino chapter 22 . 7/27/2019
please keep this story going I am enjoying it so far I want to know what happens next.
DireLegendz chapter 22 . 5/6/2019
This is an absolutely wonderful story! I love it! can't wait for the next one
WolfyVannah5 chapter 13 . 2/19/2019
I love this story! I was hoping that Octavia would be more understanding in regards to the situation with Finn but other than that, I love how everything is going. I’m curious if Clarke will end up with Raven or Lexa. Or maybe no one at all, that would be ok too.
Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 22 . 1/13/2019
The writing style could use some work at times, but the central concept is very well-handled overall; good job.
The chain of events that lead to Clarke becoming a cyborg are well thought-out, setting up a plausible set of circumstances that also justifies why we never saw that technology used among the Ark inhabitants in the series itself. You also put some interesting thought into giving Clarke advantages and disadvantages with her new arms, ranging from her left one being stronger than the right to the risk of them suffering water damage. Even the resulting impact this has on her relationship with Anya in particular made sense; with Anya seeing evidence of Clarke’s strength and her weakness, she comes to respect her former enemy to a greater extent due as she recognises the advantages of her approach.
Granted, I’m kind of surprised it took that long for Clarke to consider the possibility that someone hid a tracking device in one of her arms, considering that it would likely be far easier to do something like that than just put something in a human body, but the exploration of her new dynamic with Anya and Lexa more than makes up for that, I assure you (I’m so-so about Clarke/Raven as a pairing, but that’s just personal preference on my part, I assure you).
There might not be as many changes to the overall storyline, but with the possibility of more stories to be told in this new version of events, as Clarke has to adapt to her new life with the Triku while keeping her most personal secret, I certainly look forward to seeing what else we can expect to find as the Triku adapt to their armless warrior while the Skaikru try to adjust to life on the ground.
Usurper97 chapter 22 . 1/9/2019
This was a very good story but I'm glad to hear the sequel will be AU. the character development in this story was super good and highly look forward to more of them.

I have one request for the sequel. I like when a strong/skilled character are challenged by unknowingly characters and the strong character surprise everyone with the skill or even power. Like when Abby challenges Clarke but Clarke knows she has all the power. Or when someone like Bellamy tries to fight Clarke but she easily beats him. I like stuff like that. :)

Anyway, Have fun with your new RWBY story and I'll wait patiently for this sequel.
Joseph chapter 22 . 12/4/2018
Great fic keep up the awesome work. Please update again soon. :)
Guest chapter 22 . 11/30/2018
Jesus Octavia is still fucking closed minded. She doesn’t deserve to be in Trikru. She doesn’t deserve to be Ckarke’s Friend. Fuck Octavia. Can’t stand her ignorance.
Magic2488 chapter 22 . 12/1/2018
Really good. Is it just gonna be Raven/Clarke or is Lexa and maybe Octavia gonna be added to their relationship?
Guest chapter 21 . 11/29/2018
Die Abby. Stupid bitch.
Arcane Charmcaster chapter 1 . 12/1/2018
Oh a rwby story? Sounds interesting. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or if you want a beta hit me up. Lol rwby is one of my favorite fandoms.
toile grant chapter 22 . 12/1/2018
good
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