Very nice but more plot is needed

damn

I liked the chapter, hope you can post another one soon.
Also can you not use the honorfics, there's really no reason for it.

Why Miraxus? I dont know exactly why but for some reason I can not stand that pairing. It is probably one of my two least favorite pairings. (The other is nalu, yeah i know, call me crazy.) Also from how this is written it seems like Wendy is older, may I ask how old she is?

Good start. Besides a few mistakes I can happily say I cant wait to see more!

Great start

I'm not sure how many Fairy Tail fics I've said this on. Do not use Japanese honorifics for this series. They do not belong. Like 3 characters in the whole series have any oriental background and 2 of them are dead. The only reason they are used in the raw/sub is because that's just how their language works. The honorifics aren't there in the translations.

Aside from that, good job. While short, it's a decent beginning. Also, while my OTP is NatsuxMirajane, Sometimes other pairs can be good.

Not bad so far, i'm interested to see what's next.

I loved it! You have great writing and it seems as if everything is thought through. Just please make the chapters longer, I want to enjoy this story as long as possible.