please update this soon. it would be such a waste to see a good story discontinued

No offense, but this feels slightly amateurish or maybe immature in the way it's written. If I had to hazard a guess at your mental age, I'd say it's somewhere around 13-15. I'm not saying this to be mean at all, I'm just saying that the way it's written makes you sound quite young. There's too much telling of what's going on, instead of showing, and there are plenty of errors littered throughout the story. And that's not even getting into the fact that your Dumbledore seems like a bumbling old fool who is just playing at being smart. You have a good premise, don't get me wrong, and the story IS interesting, it's just bogged down by other factors. You can do better, I feel it in my gut. And I'm not saying that to admonish you, I truly believe you can make this story really good, if you don't rush it. Take your time, plan things out. You've got the length down pat, something I have a hard time with, seeing as the only time I'm able to work creatively is when my ADHD meds wear off. At that point, my attention span is horrific. I think I only barely made it to 2k words in one chapter because I had help. I made 1k each chapter regardless, unless it's a oneshot.

KEEP WRITING PLZ

Like the story would like to see more.

Love it

update please

Will Kai or Ace if not one of their friends be able to help Neville's parents? What is Molly hoping to do with coming around so much. Wonder if Arthur will do something soon?

You brought Thundercats to Kai's world? I love that they froze the others and wonder if Kai will have the Goblins protect the property from Dumbledore and his fried chickens. Maybe even put it under fidelius.

I am so glad that she is not staying in the castle and is going to hire tutors to teach her all that she needed to know. It would be wonderful to have the others with them. Will they find out what Dumbledore did and actually have him be punished this time?

Hopefully she will be able to leave Hogwarts since she is not a student and will not have Dumbledore be able to influence her or control her since she is magically an adult.

this story is interesting, and i am looking forward to reading the rest of this incredible story :3

love it