Alright, I'm sorry I don't usually ship hate on people's stories, I'm very respectful about ships and think everyone is entitled to an opinion, but shipping Deku with Midnight is not okay, midnight is a grown adult and Deku is 16 and everything about that is not just morally wrong but also illigal. While I still think you can have your own opinion and won't say anything else, you shouldn't ship things like that.

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i say let Midnight and Uravity have the green haired smoker

are you still working on this?

Awesome story
Though mineta should have been droped by aizawa since he has no potential
Keep updating
Thank you

Well, after of some days of thinking, I'm ready for the review:
Very nice chapter. I like the action, I like the new Midoriya... I like all. It's very entertaining, and reminds me when the crossovers mean "not just the characters appearing on that world. Elements, ideas, concepts mixing between both worlds.". Now, the crossovers aren't very spectacular (Recommendation: A gem in the Rough, by Drillmaster. I even made a review on Youtube of almost 40 minutes. Crossover between One Piece and Steven Universe, where all works).
Now, the points:
1. Actually I don't have any problem with a Pairing with Midnight. Look, I have been reading fanfics since 2012. I read things and I read THINGS. This pairing isn't material for nightmares, and even less something controversial. Isn't ethical? It's : We write what we want to write.
2. Is going fast the relationship? I don't know. I'm known for don't be very patience, but I know the importance of take the time for something. This is something that, personally, just the creator can choose and think.
3. Love rivalry: Midnight vs Uraraka? It can be cool, but it has a little problem. If there was a rivalry, then that would mean that Uraraka knows her intentions and actions... then why doesn't she say it to the Principal? Literally it would be The Sword of Damocles. In fact, I can say that JustAGuy536's idea works better and the rivalry then would have more sense. But like I always say: The writer is who choose.
4. Todoroki being a friend like-brother for Midoriya is always cool for me. It is an element that I would love see on the anime (It leaves clear that are friends, but it is a friendship very cold (not related with any joke))
5. The idea of the third point leaves me with a huge conflict of choices. Because while I would like see that, Midnight is 31 years old. That would mean that She has been working as an Official Pro-Hero for 13 years more or less. But after of think it while I was sleeping, I had an idea (just an idea. you choose if it is a good one, bad one or good but needs some modifications):
Todoroki joins to Midoriya as Vigilant, and Midnight leaves the UA, comes back as a Pro-Hero and when She can, works with them, don't caring about their position as vigilants.
Just an idea, and I even think that needs to be polished.
Saying goodbye.

Okay this is a great story. I could actually see not only a rivalry, but maybe a budding harem if some cards are played right. Also it would be best for Shoto and Midnight to stay at UA to help Izuku. Please have Izuku pummel Mineta soon though. I've seen a few anime with super perv characters, and unlike any of them, Mineta has absolutely NO redeeming qualities at all.

I think that this story goes a little too fast and no content about it whatsoever . But eh, we'll wing it.

Love this chapter, it had an excellent fight, an new friendship forming, and a slow but well looking romance. And if you're looking for a future story, feel free to check out the challenge I posted on my page a few minutes ago.

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the actual fuck is this pairing?

why?
Midnight is a teacher, this is not acceptable!

STOP! YOU ARE VIOLATING THE LAW! (Technically not due to Japan's age of consent being 13 and only being raised if others say so.)
and why the fuck did this relationship start so quickly?

She's a hero, she may not look like it but she DOES have standards. I believe having a relationship with her students is a big no. (like tf?)

anyways, im still reading cause im bored.

-soda-fiedpsycho

Nice but if ur gonna give Midnight a love rival why not some of the heroes like Ryukyuk, Pixie Bob (cause she also follows the ‘age is just a number’ rule or Mt. Lady (scratch the last one...wait definitely her because he isn’t Izuku’s type but she’ll still try only for Nemu too rub it in)

Other than that keep it up my dude

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! Wow... Nemuri the seductive sadist was actually depressed by Smoker's Tragic Backstory; I Guess she had a heart under all that sadism after all if she could feel such sincere heartfelt emotion to such a terrible fate;

I Can TOTALLY See Todoroki & Smoker being Platonic best Friends(they get along well, and since Smoker's in a Romantic & Carnal relationship with Nemuri)

Have them both stay but support what he does

I like it nicely done cool quirk great fic cant wait for next update

Should totally do itsuka with deku just because such a rare pair