Reviews for Star Wars: Ascendancy
Stryderson chapter 15 . 7/5
Tenso...
Stryderson chapter 3 . 7/4
Tá muito bom, escrita boa, enredo está indo bem, da gosto de ler.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/5
At least change the title to say is is an April fool's joke. It is long past April 1st and to not discourage people change the title or make the statement at the end not backwards.
sguti392 chapter 2 . 4/13
Omg I absolutely agree Dave dropped the ball on the sith holocron with Ezra.
swalublue chapter 3 . 4/7
So far I've noticed only one minor mistakes you have made so far. One Thrawn was introduced in season 3 of SWR which took place in 2 BBY the Liberation of Lothal took place 0-BBY a few months before the Battle of Yavin. Which means Ezra has been fighting Thrawn for around 2 years not one. Other than else so far I haven't seen to many problems with this story.
Guest chapter 15 . 4/5
My immediate reaction after reading Chapter 15 and your April Fools note was, “They had us in the first half, I’m not gonna lie.”
I was overjoyed to see that you had updated after months, but having to read how Ezra fell off a cliff and everyone died was awful. I thought to myself, ‘Noooo, a year spent following this story and it’s ended in one of the most absurd/sad ways possible.’
But anyways, hooray you’re back! I enjoyed Chapter 14, especially the way you had Thrawn lead Ezra through an investigation of the Narivan’s art. I feel like it’s a rite of passage of sorts when it comes to Thrawn? We’ve seen him act that way with Eli, Faro, and even Pelleon so it was cool reading the exchange between Thrawn and Ezra at the monument. Your argument between Thrawn and Ezra was also well written. I literally muttered, “Damn” as Thrawn roasted Ezra. It was so tense, and I can’t wait to read the rest of the story!
nst.osypova chapter 6 . 4/2
Good one! It's still more interesting than last trilogy How quickly everything could take a dark turn and go through unstoppable chain of consequences though
OechsnerC chapter 15 . 4/1
Hahah
AlmostFriendless chapter 15 . 4/1
I hate you (jk love your work and you), I thought this was a new chapter. *screams*
Imperial warlord chapter 15 . 4/1
Great April fools joke.
swalublue chapter 1 . 4/1
So a minor mistake you made is in the timeline, first of all Season 4 episode Family Reunion - and Farewell takes place in 0BBY and the ending scence was in 5ABY after Endor
Ashla07 chapter 15 . 4/1
That is a really brutal ending.
I am really sad that the story is over and do kind of wish that you had finished writing the story in depth, this is one of my favourites and was so excited to see a new chapter.
Oh, I just read your backwards authors note when I noticed it wasn’t just random letters.
THANK GOD!
You really scared me!
I have decided to leave my note even though, thankfully, the story is not over because I really don’t want you to stop writing so, there are my thoughts.
I have decided that I hate April fools, I almost got tricked into thinking that my school day went until 8 and now this? Why?!
Thank you so much for not actually ending the story like that, Ezra falling off a cliff with no reason and Kallus betraying Zeb are kind of big pills to swallow. Also, don’t kill off Thrawn like that! And I nearly had a heart attack when you made the sequel villains major plot points. Please don’t do that. Well, go to that extent anyway. I am so glad you didn’t end such a wonderful story like that. It was really dark and... just thank you.
I look forward to your next chapter.
Mogor chapter 15 . 4/1
What is it with you? This whas a VERY BAS CHAPTER. Afoul. Very very bad. You can do better then this. Bad on you bad. You a bad person. YUCK. I whas thinking that this story whas very good and now you make it very bad. Shame on you. SHAME.
Alfa2K19 chapter 15 . 4/1
Damn. I cant believe i just got april fooled.
brolyssj1 chapter 14 . 3/31
As usual, I loved this chapter. I fell in love with the world building and character development in the first few chapters.
I noticed you mentioned that the world building can be a pain. Might I suggest a program like Campfire? It is an extremely useful organizational tool to not only log character data, but events and locations.
All that aside, Im really looking forward to the next chapter!
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