Just read this whole story in one night. Loved it off too read the next one

This was great! I can't believe the last time I read this story - so many chapters back! Good thing I caught up quickly.

Like I said, another wonderful chapter! This was completed rather quickly, so that's cool. It must've taken a lot of patience to finish it all up for years and then start publishing it. If it were me, I'd start publishing a story just after 2 chapters! That's how little patience I lack!

Anyway, back to your story. I don't have much to say about it except it's going really good. I can't wait for the sequel and I'll be following it too!

ooh voldemort

So I wonder why Harry didn't notice Lucy in the mirror though. :P

Enjoyed the moment with George. Oh, is this a story you are re-doing from 10 years ago? Funny, I'm doing something very similar with mine (playing with a 15 year old idea). Fun to revisit old ideas, isn't it

Anyway I do wish this was a little less focused on the book descriptions and dialogue, I'll admit, because when you go off and write your own thing it's incredibly lovely and very interesting - like the moment with George, and the stuff with Jeremy, which I like a lot. But well, your additions to Harry's story are lovely, and since I have the books just about memorized, this makes for very fast reading. :P I interested to see how it all progressed over time.

Lucy seems to be really hating on Ron.

Yep, I'm pretty sure the portraits love to gossip. Glad they're all friends now. :)
Rina

yummy dinner

Cool. I was wondering if you’d replace Neville with Lucy in this scene but you went with all 5. Lucy should be loads of fun in the Halloween scene, I imagine.

Finally had a chance to catch up! I like your spin on this chapter... by putting Lucy more with the girls and the twins you’re spending less time rehashing events of the book, which I enjoy. Nice use of Sally-Anne. I like where you’re going with Jeremy! Having flying lessons weekly absolutely makes sense. I think your theory about Harry being excused is probably a good one. I mean he clearly didn’t need them.
Good job!
Rina

Another great chapter! I honestly don't have much to say for this. It seems she's really getting close to the Weasley twins and Lee Jordan. I'm interesting in Jeremy's background. Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter!

Great chapter! It was well written, like usual. I honestly feel like Jeremy's gonna be the guy Lucy'll end up with. I'm waiting for the next chapter.

I like that you have patches and that Lucy and Hermione are becoming friends. I suppose you may focus more on Lucy and Hermione time than Harry and Ron time leading up to Halloween? Anyway very cute!

Fun, Lucy goes to Hogwarts! I see what you mean about the quoting, haha. Definitely a bit like re-reading the series then. Happy Birthday!

Rina

I've finished reading this story so far and I have to say - I'm quite impressed. This is really interesting. I wonder how Lucy will find out about her parents and how she'll react to it. And I also wonder how she's going to affect the overall story.
Your writing style is great and smooth.
I'll be following this for now and I'll wait for the next update!

Oh my goodness, the Burrow? That place is going to get cramped! Lol. But makes sense if you’re sticking her right into Harry’s narrative. Lovely chapter here. A black cat named Evie? Haha I’m sensing Sabrina and Pokemon vibes all at once! Are they intended?

This is really a very lovely story. Glad I found it!