I really can't wait for the consequences to happen to him and it will be great

The meeting with OAA shows him as being a hipocrite as by having this chat he has taken the supposed free will that his creations have by the whole disappointed spiel. You have beings like thanos who go around killing half the pop on a planet and he doesn't get a meeting.

How would you go about Leo's redemption reset everything after whatever karma he's definitely earned cause you would need to have a villain or hero with sentry level abilities who could be his equal?

Wow, that is some bullshit Sebastian spouted. Being a mutant or having other super powers don't make one immune from the base urges of highly sentient beings. In fact, he himself is a thief for somehow stealing Strange's possessions.

nice story. is he going to exceed one above all? then go to other universes and have somene fun?

Okay, wow, I knew you forewarned at the beginning that this would be a dark story, but I honestly didn’t expect THIS dark and twisted.
I am glad that you’re doing a Marvel story, and that it’s more based on the comics than the various cartoons or movies, but does it have to be THIS dark?
I mean, you usually do more “Chaotic Neutral Anti-Hero” stories, which are honestly among the best, and while Marvel has an overwhelming number of interesting and OP characters and has a tendency to resurrect dead characters, it doesn’t feel like this story will last long if you kill off too many too quickly, especially if they don’t come back.

Also, even though this story will have a dark beginning that becomes more Anti-Hero and balanced in nature in the future, why did you pick “Tragedy” and “Angst” as the genres?
The former is usually too overdramatic and dark (and not in a good way) and also implies very PAINFUL personal loss like where everyone relevant dies, while the latter is often considered too annoying and one that most authors typically AVOID.
You can have a darkish story WITHOUT those genres in particular.
Personally, you should’ve picked a combination of either “Adventure”, “Romance”, “Fantasy”, and/or “Sci-Fi”.
Those would be more appropriate for a Marvel story, even one with a darkish premise or at least a dark beginning.

Why are you making him someone’s subordinate?

What the fuck

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