...A baby dying is REALLY sensitive...

And it hits you right in the feels definitely...

But more importantly...

I admit I DID forget yesterday and anything else I say is just an EXCUSE and I'm SORRY!

Hopefully this makes up for yesterday!

Well this was depressing, but for all the right reasons. I gotta say you have a real talent for writing from a child's perspective. It was also quite amusing to see a character like Koga play the role of the comforting parent. For all the wonder and awe of Inuyasha's world, it can be easy to forget that it was a time when infant deaths were quite common.

nice and sad

I love this pairing. The story was sad because their second daughter died, but I love how there was no blame placed on each other (like what happens most of the time in real life). I love how Kouga loves Ayame so much and loves his little family. Great job and I love it. I wish there were more stories with this pairing.

It did~! *Sobs*

Oh, this was so heartbreaking. Things were going so beautifully for the family, and then...
Even so, it's nice to get a story where Koga and Ayame are together and happy. Most of the halfway decent ones I've come across are incomplete (and likely to never be finished).