This was rather well written. Really enjoying this actially

Glorious beginnings. Always love classical fantasy stories so seeing a perverted parody uncharacteristically pissed me off

I Fucking love this

I love the guide

Lmao i love how they're just talking about which monster girl would win in a fight

Man, this story is so unique. Nice to see an update. The Grangold king releasing Antinne is a pretty big development. And getting some more info on Apollyon's motivations and this whole chaos thing is appreciated.

im happy you didn't abandon this story!

I'm not sure if Apollyon's plan to fight chaos would work. From what I understand, every world is in danger of being consumed by chaos, and following the original timeline merely delays this. On the other hand, it's not like we know everything about chaos yet, so who knows?

one...two...three...FOUR!

...Well, that's pushing the limits of the T rating. In fact, I think that the succubus feeding scene might push this fic up to an M rating. It was funny to see the Legionnaires' traumatised reactions to this aspect of succubus biology, though.

"Morrigan Aensland, the Pure White Devil" - a Darkstalkers and Succubus Prison reference in one.

So now the Sabasa Legionnaire is going for Lily. I'm guessing that she'll take an interest in this strange giant and follow him around, instead of just continuing her reign of terror.

The Legion has no understanding of family or love? It's been a while since I've read the earlier chapters, but I don't remember anything like this being shown.

The Miko Arachne segment made me think it was the one that appears in Paradox as a normal enemy, before I realised that it was Charlotte's/Spider Princess' backstory. It makes sense, considering her dress.

The battle for Fort Gold was well-written, not too detailed or too rushed. It shows how the canon monsters aren't just weaker than the original ones, their intelligence, cooperation and more refined magic are actual advantages. And now Charlotte is Octavius' unwanted mistress... I'm interested to see how this turns out.

Ymir and Octavius coming to a sort of understanding is touching, in a way. Though it sounds like Typhon misinterpreted Ymir's message in a way that will ensure more conflict.

Minor nitpick (and I didn't really go into this in my fic), but Thalia is modelled after an alraune, not a dryad.

Degenerates like these belong on a cross. Ave Caesar!

I was a King

I liked this chapter, it felt a bit like a sidestory but with elements of plot progression so while there wasn't too much being advanced I did like it. I also really enjoyed the perspectives of the world being created. I like seeing Ilias portrayed more than she was in MGQ, that is anything more than a psychopath I like to think she was once kind and that is was a mixture of loneliness and power that made her that way. But does this mean we'll be seeing the other 5 big monsters anytime soon? If the Legion's slaughter has got one up surely the others aren't far behind.

That was a great Illias origin and perspective in the beginning. You've really change my perspective of her.