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The fic is pretty good. I mean half the time all everyone does is gawk at how badass and powerful Killua is that nothing really gets done. Yeah, I get it its a Killua fic but does EVERYTHING have to revolve around him and him only?

Then anytime he uses a new ability he has to explain himself with cringey explanations like “lightning enhanced blah blah” and its just really weird to read.

It also would be even better if Killua wasn’t literally on Izuku’s back 24/7. He was literally there for every single important moment of his life that it feels like they are attached to the hip.

Also, everyone seems to feel entilted to an explanation and try and break down Killua’s abilities like its an episode of death battle. “He lifted a slab of rock with no effort so why tf can he not throw ball hard” things like thats gets annoying.

And Killua is so edgy always flashing his killing intent on anyone who even remotely threatens him. I feel like it should only be used on really desperate situations and not just as a damn class lesson.

All in all, 7/10

Gob*! So u mean to tell me no rape or pregnancy gob* disappointing! !

Yea don't listen to them, but u should really get toga pregnant whith killua's child. That'll be interesting

Si es verdad que publicas cada 10 meses, no te presionó pero por favor no dejes la historia. Es una de las mejores que he leído y me encanta como pones a Killua, como se desenvuelve en un mundo nuevo que no conoce y las habilidades que maneja
, realmente espero poder ver el siguiente capítulo, si lo pones cada 10 o 9 meses significa que el siguiente lo subirás en julio o agosto verdad? Por favor hazlo los pronto que puedas, por dónde vivo el covib-19 ha hecho el cierre de muchos lugares y mi ciudad es el tercer lugar en nuevo de contagios, como no puedo salir las cosas que me divierten son pocas y entre ellas es continuar leyendo esta historia.

Realmente me encanta tu historia, se que ha pasado muchos meses desde que subiste el capítulo 6 pero en verdad quisiera que la continuarás, es increíble lo que has hecho y si es que la cancelaste o la públicas en otro lugar quiero leerla. Por favor espero puedas seguir. Saludos desde Ciudad Madero.

Please update

I really liked your history, novel, i don't know. I'm from Brazil and I'm waiting the next chapter.

Please update soon! This is one of the best fanfiction I've seen!

Please fucking update soon I really want to see the usj fights

I’M SO EXCITED FOR THE CONTINUATIONNNNN! I love, love, love, LOVE! This fanfiction!

Please update I really don’t want this story to be dead I think it’s the best hunter x hunter crossover fanfiction I’ve ever read

For some reason my review didnt show up so here it is again. I think you march killua's personality to how he would adapt to the new world, and I love how you gave killua artificial magnetism. Overall there isnt many, if any, plotholes and it is written very well. The only problem I have is that everyone has nen, despite the dufferant world, even if locked. Love the story, and you will update next month? 10 months from 1st to 2nd chapter, so 10 months from 6-7(or however many).

I love the story. I feel like it matches killua's personality of how he would adapt to the differant world. I also like how you gave him artificial magnetism as an ability. The only problem I have is that you gave people from MHA nen, even if it is locked. You will update next month correct? I figure that because in the 2nd chapter you stopped for ten months, and ten months is almost up, from the last update.

Gonna update next month, arent you?