| Reviews for Yoru - Gamer Between Dimensions |
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   Abaddon Kikoskia chapter 12 . 7/16 I like the Root of Darkness, I love gamer stories, I am willing to forgive a lot for a concept I enjoy. That fight was painful to read and I think the problem is immediately that some whiny teen from a nowhere village is somehow much stronger than someone who has been a gamer for 3 years and been active in a massive war. |
| A Simple Library chapter 5 . 7/15 Oh my god! Finally, someone understands my pain! I swear, every decent Gamer story I had to drop just because the main character went around telling everyone about his stupid bullshit powers... And don't get me started on the party system! How the hell does that make sense?! None of the party members have Gamer's Body, so they shouldn't even be able to level up like the Gamer, but somehow they do? SO fucking annoying... |
| scorched halloween chapter 23 . 7/8 So he goes to the snake prior to asking J? Author I thought you said you hated plot-induced stupidity |
| Bearmauls chapter 27 . 7/7 Vengeful Yoru... damn. |
| Bearmauls chapter 25 . 7/7 Assuming the masked man is Obito, how did he use izanagi and then continue to use sharingan abilities? Doesn't it use up the eye, and Obito only has one sharingan left... |
| Bearmauls chapter 22 . 7/7 Electrical nuke... only way to be sure :) |
| Bearmauls chapter 19 . 7/7 I am amused that Yoru basically walks around either naked, or in damaged/destroyed clothes. I'm assuming he just never walks near the Hyuuga clan? |
| Bearmauls chapter 16 . 7/6 The entity is interesting, although it doesn't really explain why Yoru has his abilities. |
| Bearmauls chapter 15 . 7/6 Brilliant use of the second wind perk; making a suicide attack not suicidal! |
| Bearmauls chapter 10 . 7/6 It feels like the ninja talk to much on-mission. They're ANBU, shouldn't they be talking in coded hand-sign and military short-hand? I get that you need to convey the information to the audience, but it makes them feel kinda un-professional when they're throwing weapons and teasing each other while actually in the field. |
| Bearmauls chapter 8 . 7/6 It feels like Kushina and Minato got attached to the main character a little too quickly. Their interactions are adorable, though :) |
| Bearmauls chapter 2 . 7/6 Ah, his confusing knowledge situation becomes clearer. |
| Bearmauls chapter 1 . 7/6 Interesting start, but it feels a bit lacking in backstory. The main character feels weirdly uninterested in exploring WHY he has knowledge he shouldn't have. He both does and doesn't remember his history? |
| Kuro.435 chapter 5 . 7/6 Ahahah Kotoe’s never-ending speech was hilarious, loved how he got her attention |
| Kuro.435 chapter 4 . 7/6 Good chapter, it was a good way to speed things up on his training “montage” |
