Reviews for Brother O' Mine |
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KingArthur502 chapter 3 . 8/13 This is a really good story! Please update soon! |
Woah chapter 3 . 7/30 This makes me feel an undescribable feeling of sadness and impotence. Holy fuck. I want them to realize please. |
Glaux Bryonia chapter 3 . 4/21 This is lovely! Very intriguing. I am curious how the big reveal is going to happen and I am looking forward to it! Thank you for writing! |
Leviathian chapter 3 . 9/26/2019 Yes... Yes! The mental anguish and denial my cold heart yearns for. I wish there was more lol |
VisitorNo.18 chapter 3 . 1/25/2019 Oh wow, this is just- a mess. Sabo is a mess (an indenial mess) and Marco is jelly! :D But in my opinion, Sabo should have asked, more on East Blue and how he knew/heard about Goa. Maybe Ace would tell he was found floating in the ocean there, maybe Sabo would laugh hysterical at the story and hug Ace because he realized, this is MY Ace, My Ace who forgot, but he is definately MINE, and he'll tell about what happened in Goa and Ace would finally have the answers he never knew he was looking for... But that's not what happened. Maybe in another time, they'd talk it out, but this time, Sabo is too busy being indenial- after all, his Ace would never pout like Luffy. |
CanIHaveAHug chapter 3 . 1/24/2019 EXCELLENT chapter, i love the angst and how you handle the difficult dynamic of sabo and ace’s relationship, it’s awesome! And lmao marco, ‘idiots at 3 o’clock!’ XD |
StarPurpleandBlue chapter 2 . 1/5/2019 Ohh, this is very interesting so far! My poor bby Sabo, he suffered so much with Ace's death. I cried internally with the whole "my Ace and this Ace can't look the same so the logical conclusion is that I forgot my Ace's face". Like, damn. That hit hard. Poor baby. I really like how you added some parts with Koala and Hack, showing more of Sabo's revolutionary side, and some of the Whitebeards so we could understand what happened with Ace. The whole talk with Jozu was very nice to read! Can't wait to see where you're going! I have a feeling Sabo has quite a bit more of misery before he and Ace can reunite as brothers properly haha I wonder how Ace will regain his memories in this. Thanks for writing and sharing such a nice story! |
Shion Lee chapter 2 . 12/24/2018 Oh god |
tofldh chapter 2 . 12/4/2018 Wow so interesting! Ace is the one lost memories? Ohhh! And of course Sabo is...well. |
CanIHaveAHug chapter 2 . 12/3/2018 yikes. yIKES. I hurt! ;;;—;;; Excellent story, love the tension and angst. Cant wait for next chapter! :D |
Myherogal22 chapter 2 . 12/2/2018 Omg! This story has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it! |
amreed chapter 2 . 12/2/2018 Oh Sabo. Honey, sweetheart, baby boy no. I’m so happy and so sad. |
luringsirensvoice chapter 1 . 11/25/2018 Sounds great so far, can't wait for the two to meet tho |
Insomniac Dormouse chapter 1 . 11/21/2018 Wow! This was amazing; I can’t wait for more! ~ID |
amreed chapter 1 . 11/21/2018 Oh my I think I’m in love! This is so well written and it’s a premise I’ve been looking for for a while now. I’m going to love the next chapter I can already tell. I think I might need a tissue just in case tho. |