Reviews for Brain and Brawn |
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the3littlewords chapter 4 . 5/3 Kudos |
c.karen09 chapter 4 . 3/12 Very nice, thank you for sharing! |
c.karen09 chapter 1 . 3/12 Yes, I believe he really did love Hermione. He simply let Ron have her. Thanks for writing! |
brady66 chapter 4 . 2/9 What a cute story! Wish you would continue it |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 Good good |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/22/2019 Good |
twilliams1797 chapter 4 . 5/23/2019 you tell a compelling story in 4000 words, where there are those who waste electrons and time and our patience to say nothing in 10000 words. I just read over this story and IMO the most compelling part is where Hermione's mum tells her to do what she planned. Wow. lets just say, well done, just as it sits. Sirius' conversation...IF you can pull off what you did with these 4 short chapters, the conversations with Sirius..interspecies relationships and such... on teething. my oldest was/is somewhat autistic. He had panic attacks/ bad dreams, and would scream for 2 hours at a time. I became proficient at taking him for long drives, or holding him while standing in a hot shower. He got over it and we all survived, though it was not very fun. (he's 39 now and he takes care of us) |
alix33 chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 "Jean tried to soothe her", not "Jean tried to sooth her", since "sooth" is a noun which is a near-synonym for "truth". |
alix33 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 AW! I love Harry's realisation! When's he going to tell Hermione, though? |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 4 . 5/22/2019 Excellent. I really like it through and through. And I would absolutely read that one-shot too. |
ElizabethMKJP chapter 3 . 2/17/2019 I can't wait to read the next one. I love this, I like to think that Hermione has Harry as a insentive yo won this war but Aldo that somehow her parents are waiting her too |
Rae chapter 3 . 2/7/2019 update please! |
Fallow55 chapter 3 . 12/17/2018 xxx Kudos xxx : ) |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/9/2018 Good |
leonix2009 chapter 3 . 12/9/2018 Wow that was a great chapter It really must have been hard for hermione to tell everything to her parents and erase their memories Let's see what happens next Thanks for the update I enjoyed it very much |