Reviews for Red Herring
Stubenhocker chapter 2 . 2/5/2019
Oh. My. Gawd. Update please, I love it! Your combination is unique and I can’t wait for more chapters! You did a really really good job, and I just absolutely love the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Densolator chapter 2 . 2/4/2019
Really like how this is turning out haha. Hoping for more chapters!
agirl0ntheinternet chapter 2 . 2/4/2019
So when he is ok he is Dragion And when he's angry he is Dragneel
Those are very conflicting personalities to put together in one person and not make it seem weird
aliciacevbra chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
An interesting story to say, I wonder if Lucy achieves her goal
MOONECLIPSEHQ chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
Update soon this was awesome!
narutoyaoifan chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
The story is amazing and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
valerioux chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
That was a fun read. I’m curious if Natsu is truly timid to talk to Lucy one on one in the situation he was in with her or he plays the part? Can’t wait to see where this goes
stranger1999 chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
I love how you've created a Natsu based on his edolas, earthland and end personalities mixed together!
I've always adored his edolas counterpart so it's interesting how you've integrated him into the story
loved his reaction to Lucy's teasing and loved it even more the 180 his demeanour did when that Tony guy was being a jerk!XD(it was hot)
I loved this chapter and I honestly can't wait for more!
BrokenAngelWings83 chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
yeah, I'm in for a world of thrills here. my soul has been sold to the devil which is you. amazing first chapter! I'm so happy to be along for this crazy ride! natsu as Lucy's bodyguard? lifecomplete
MissVarta chapter 2 . 2/2/2019
So is the “nerd persona” for a ‘mission’? Is Natsu working for Erza? Aaah So excited where you’re taking this! I hope we see more of Lucy scheming and trying to seduce “shy” Natsu lol Can’t wait for more!
stranger1999 chapter 1 . 12/19/2018
this was so intense!Is Natsu in the mafia or something?or is he in some rich gang?
whatever it is I am now hooked!
at least there's something to look forward to in 2019 now!XD
FlameDragonHime chapter 1 . 12/11/2018
This looks so good omg I can't wait!
CeceliaStar chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
So exciting! sounds pretty good - like an actual book Can't wait!
BrokenAngelWings83 chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Mira yer gonna kill me slowly
MillennialStargazer chapter 1 . 11/24/2018
Intrigued so far! Can’t wait for more!
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