Reviews for Just Us
MarCor3 chapter 3 . 6/15
Wow, since this last update - their closeness has became officially CANON! ️ May 2020️
shortymcnugget chapter 3 . 5/28
This is so amazing ! I loved the detail and actually feeling. I love them so much!
Scope Eva chapter 3 . 11/21/2019
This was an interesting one, and fairly deep. Not sure how much I buy the whole wind/fate compelling them to meet, at least the second time but the emotional interaction was delicious. I especially like how you give Catra some more friendly feline qualities all cat owners would be familiar with. Big cats do do those things as well after all.

It's also nice to imagine how things could grow from here. Maybe this turns them from enemies into more rivals, their fight into more of a game where deep down they both know they couldn't truly hurt each other beyond a few broken bones. Maybe even reconciling enough to start joking between them over the antics in their various encounters during their clandestine rendezvous.
How that would effect the events of the following seasons... well, that's a much larger project I could only speculate on. Maybe some scenario where Catra is reluctantly seeking out Swift Wind to rescue Adora from something? Beast Island maybe? Would make a nice excuse to go there if Entrapta never gets sent there.
I can't imagine, without braking off contact with each other that Catra would do many of the things she did in the series. Or maybe some bizarre duality could continue? Imagine that would be tricky to justify though.

But why am I speculating when the dates of the last update imply you've already written more? Onwards!
EndlessChains chapter 3 . 9/16/2019
A well done story. Quite the interesting aftermath for season one as Adora worries for Catra's well being and Catra can't seem to let go of Adora. This was a sad, but endearing story of the two as they continue to meet one another despite being at war with one another. It was amusing how the two would interact with one another from being awkward on being unsure how to act to being nostalgic as they go back to their former routines when living with one another. Well done with the emotional roller coaster that took place between the two as they were unsure of how to feel about the other throughout their interactions, but would settle being with one another when they need it. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Nonyaarb chapter 3 . 8/9/2019
i think this is awesome
Stripesicles222 chapter 3 . 5/14/2019
I start a new show, and once caught up, decide its time to find some fanfiction for that show.
Upon finishing a story, I just so happen to scroll up and catch a glance of the author's name ('cuz seriously, who pays attention to that stuff anymore?). Lo and behold, it's one I'm very familiar with.
I honestly just can't seem to avoid your works.

And as I've said several times before, great work, as always.
V01dSw0rd chapter 2 . 4/24/2019
Just because Catra doesn't "NEED" her... has nothing to do with the fact that she DOES "want" her.

*sighs*
Traumatized idiot, lying to herself.

Stockholm Syndrome is DEFINITELY a thing.
SharkdarkX chapter 1 . 4/2/2019
Hi! I had do this before so, i'm gonna say Sorry first,.
I love your Fanfic so much! And i started to do a comic about it! I hope you don't mind, i should asked you before, so if you want i will delete the comic of my insta, but of course in all the panels i'm giving you the credit! My insta is the same that this name, SharkdarkX, Sorry again, for not asked you first️
My english is Really bad, i hope you can understand me
White Eevee chapter 3 . 1/19/2019
Omg. The shower line XD

Excited baby Catra is life. Poor Catra, though, not knowing how to swim… It’s fortunate she has Adora to cover for her and help her out. But then again… Catra probably hates that memory now, since it’s proof of her weakness and that Adora stooped to help her.

The alternative title for this chapter is Catra gets a grooming session xD

I think this is a good place to end. As you say, it would start to feel forced, and I think that this is good enough to complicate their relationship ;P
vanSane chapter 1 . 1/18/2019
omg this was pure perfection :3
the chemistry was sooo on Point !
thank You!
White Eevee chapter 2 . 1/16/2019
I appreciate that you stick to the storyline from the show and don’t have any unrealistic Catradora scenes. I’ve always understood Catra’s side, even if it makes me upset. She has a lot of baggage and self-loathing she needs to unpack before she could ever have any unreserved tenderness with Adora.

Go, Catra! Beat up those soldiers! Don’t let anyone see you’re human :’(
I like the line about her heartbeat making her feel weak. Very Catra frustration. I think your dialogue for Catra is very good. Nice dose of sarcasm and self-consciousness.

You sure like to torture Catra xD

Kinda of wish there was some Bow or Glimmer scenes. just for some juxtaposition between that friendship and those needs and Catra and Adora’s relationship. Not that the Catrdora isn’t adorable and characters sharing a bed and snuggling isn’t my #1 favorite fic trope. You’re good at capturing the character’s dialogue, so I’d love to see some other characters! But of course, ignore me if that’s not what your brain’s happy with. I don’t want to be one of those people that says “write this, write that!” because it’s good so far as is.

Sentence that begins “More tears have gathered at the corners…” line should say “Catra is refusing to let them fall,” rather than “refusing the let”
White Eevee chapter 1 . 1/15/2019
“While Adora still enjoyed getting to see the people of Etheria shimmer in their mirth” - I really like this line. It paints a vivid picture.

:( Poor Adora when she’s chasing Catra. This may be the only time that Adora’s not better than Catra at something; it’s hard to beat a cat at speed and escape.
Oh, I like the part when you say the scratches on Adora’s back are a remembrance, a desperate bid by Catra not to be forgotten. CHills.

That Whispering Wood wind is a shipper, no doubt.

Oh! Title drop. I see you and I like you.

Mmmmmmmmm. I like the hugging comfort part a lot. You do a great job keeping Adora and Catra in character. That push-pull dynamic is burning bright in this fic. Catra is especially kitty in this chapter xD

Sleep snuggles! The best!
Dreamy Wolf chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
Hi! I loved this story it was very sweet xD. I have some constructive criticism I'd like to add though, I agreed with what u said on the last chapter that writting anymore would make it feel forced, so I think you did well to stop it there ence it was such a nice story. I just wanted to say that I think chapter one could have existed on it's own, like it was so well written and honestly such a good read that I believe ending it with that tragic uncertainity of "will they see each other again/won't they" would have given it a nice tone of suspence, angst but also impllied love/complicated feelings, and then the other chapters could have been a story of their own since I believe they might've taken a bit of the heavy climate of chap 1 since too me they felt more lighthearted. It was still a very nice read though and I look forward to reading more from you
Henri9897 chapter 3 . 1/4/2019
I NEED more of it, you are NOT allowed to stop. Continue writing this fic. It is good.
Lionwolf174 chapter 3 . 12/21/2018
Hi I've come to see that you are a very talented author and I was hoping I could make the suggestion of you creating a Gender bender fanfiction if you could find that time.
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