PS: You can shut up about that now lol.

Overall, like you said, a bit of a short chapter but enjoyable. Though I think Hawkgirl’s personality is a bit off considering what part of the timeline this is in, I do like the drunken sugar bit X3

I also like the developing friendship between Di and Ragna, it’s cute.

Still loving the meta bits and references scattered throughout the story.

Also what was the harem list again, if you made any changes or not?... Maybe some sweet archer cheeks included

Could’ve sworn I reviewed this before in the past... Anyway,

Another solid chapter and I loved the many references across the board (classic style lolz).

Loving the Ragna character still, though he feels a bit... repetitive, I guess, with his dialogue in certain parts. Enjoyed the little bits with Batman, though I think he revealed his identity a little too soon for Ragna since he kinda just admitted for most of the chapter that he didn’t trust Ragna. Small change I would’ve recommended would be to have Ragna keep the Bruce Wayne revelation private and still have Batman ring Ragna for superhero stuff. If that makes sense lol.

So is he ever gonna lose it with people making fun of him and belittle him? Or just mutter and move past it?

The cafe part in my mind i straight away thought about HISHE superhero cafe

please continue this story i realy wanna read more and will hawkgirl be in the harem

"BATMAN YEET!" - Has gotta be one of my favourite lines this year.

I'm glad Ragna was the one who "played dead" alone since in most fanfiction I've read about this invasion usually has the crossover character as a tag along to Batman. Ragna saving Batman instead of patiently waiting for canon to take place felt much more organic.

About Marvel and, well, DC too. I've felt for over a decade now that media was becoming waaay to agenda driven. It makes everything predictable and dull imo along with immersion breaking as it's another layer separating reality and in these cases most devastatingly in regards to human behaviour.
I got more into manga and anime and while that has far less agenda driven work it's still there in different ways and unfortunately with its growing popularity here in the west our own agenda driven influence is effecting manga and anime too. Still it's overall much more interesting and entertaining as writers are allowed to be far more creative and less political there. I'd recommend My Hero Academia/Boku no Hero Academia if you want an interesting and deep take on a society a few centuries down the line after more and more people start developing powers, it has both light and dark elements. Heck the characterisation is awesome especially since it follows more and more characters while focusing mostly on a select few, each named character (the villains and scary smart, powerful and behave like people just like the heroes) has a backstory and all characters have development so it’s pretty awesome. That and how creatively the characters use their powers and develop them. If you ever wanted to know what it would be like for Wonder Woman to also use gadgets to broaden her skillset and use her strength (like creating ranged attacks from her strength alone) and abilities in new ways while constantly growing than it’s the standard philosophy of heroes in that series.

Though yeah, the SJW and Toxic Feminism is really damaging comics. It's pretty hypocritical when talking about privilege to ignore that women under the age of 27 are the group with the highest societal value making them also the most privileged group. Or that the Bechdel test which tries to determine how sexist a series is based on how unfrequently two named women talk about a male is utterly flawed when most producers target their media at women. Women engage a series fandom far more than men and are far more likely to bring up the media in social interactions also making most producers that use statistics (pretty much everyone) tailor their work towards women and their tastes, mainly relationship drama and romance drama. Essentially the Bechdel test is undermined because women actively want to consume entertainment that focuses on social drama, half the population is male and thus the Bechdel test is inherently noting that women are least discriminated against when media doesn't cater to what women actively seek to consume... obviously contradictory but hey it's a standard that's impossible to achieve and that continuously demands reparations to women as an audience in a way that is impossible to achieve outside of "positive" discrimination against men.
Heck look at two recent marvel and dc comics, Jean Grey is dating Scott and Wolverine who are also bisexual and most focus on them in that series is their submissive relationship with Jean and their exploration of homosexuality, I don't have anything against homosexuality but Scott and Wolverine have established characters... With DC it was the catwoman/batman/male model relationship essentially mimicking the same agenda that Marvel and Disney are leading towards. Not like its news that Disney is primarily concerned with writing towards girls and women. Essentially the human rights movement is hijacked by extremist that harm both men and women. It’s not like men aren’t worked to death around the world in horrid conditions or used as cannon fodder throughout history, people suffer under those with power in different ways. No single group can claim another is without harsh discrimination.

Sorta reminds me of a Naruto fanfic I started to read where a seal was actually hiding that Naruto was a girl and when the seal was undone she had a massive power boost because she was a girl and promptly killed all the men around her because they were useless and proclaimed her goal was to travel the multiverse and eliminate men... I was pretty surprised when I read it but I wonder if the same writer is working for Marvel now and thought that she'd toned thing's down enough to be considered acceptable.

I want women to be protected from the abuse they suffer, heck I want that abuse eliminated. I also want anyone and everyone not to be held back in the opportunities they have. I’m just not into discriminating against anyone and that includes white guys. I don’t think abusing others is how you change things, just make them worse.

I just don't understand how authors don't get that an interesting and entertaining protagonist is important. Heck coming off oc a story that had a decent premise but an incredibly dull protagonist and then reading this it's like a breath of fresh air and it's just the first chapter!

I love Ragna so far! He's pretty fun to read but no overbearing or annoying (maybe the quips will get so later?). He pretty much carried this chapter until the pay off where the timeline for this story and interacting with current super heroes (not just future ones) paid off.

Great job!

Interesting. Just try not to go too fast with your... harem. Like I've said, rushing things tend to get irritating and the sex, less is more I'd suggest. But it's up to you, none of my business. :P

Ragna seems cool, I'd like to see what happens when he loses. If he's anything like Dante, cheating death is part of their charm. But a shit kicking from someone like Urizen would be interesting. Any chance he would run into guys like Spawn or, my personal favorite, pump that fat clown, Violator, full of lead.

I guess you REALLY hated that film with a passion, whatever. I seen worse, Resident Evil among them. :P

I'll try and read, but just make sure Redgrave's story is in focus and not constantly getting into some girls skirt. I've seen enough stories that do it without proper explanation, especially from that one guy who did that Family Guy fanfic.

Happy to actually see a story with some casual downtime that's not a short pre scripted event from a show. The bit with Hawkgirl is a rare see for me and very much enjoyable. Sont see enough of her and that was cute.

Couldve put her in his bed though. Speaking if which hes got some shopping to do for Diana now including a sleeping spot. Possibly Hawkgirl if she joins in too which would be cool. Both enjoy a good fight and seem to get along well enough.

How he hasnt been outed yet though with heroes flying around, coming and going from his apartment so frequently though. Same with Wonder Woman now possibly continuing that flying in and out of trend. Eh.

Anyway great chapter. Look forward to the next one.

1) Mr. unknow: Oh she is in. And yes it is a long list, I will include it at the end of the chapter a long with a bunch of other things I want to talk about.

* Didnt. Nor for chapter 4.

Only bringing it up because of the annoyance of having a character like Kyrie be brought up and apparently been together for years yet hes not only dense about it but doesnt end up with her according to what was listed in chapter 2.

And frankly that's irritating as shit with another kicked up notch since hes having a harem.

You'll notice unlike others I didnt make any requests. Just wondering why the hell youd introduce a character like her only to have her blown off. Unless she's intended to die instead and that's why shes not there. Which would also royally suck.

2) Hit enter by accident last chapter before adding that the bit with the demon and saying hes not important enough was hilarious. Well done chapter.

3) Also forgot to say that bit about being like Naruto was off. Blocking that spherical blast and holding it off then sending it back was definitely more like DBZ.

4) Heh, Cyan is scooby doo.

5) *snickers* "Imperium Thong"

6) Two thousands, around the time man first appeared, Hell and Heaven had a war, they called it the Endless War. Satan waged war on the world of man: Eden."

* Two thousands? I'm sure that's not supposed to only say 2 thousand years either. I dont really recall I'll admit but I dont think even in dmc that humans only showed up 2 thousand years ago. Let alone DC.

1) No Kyrie or Artemis on that list? Really? : /

2) Kinda surprised he had no reaction to Hawkgirl.

3) His dramatic moment tapping into the power:

" DO NOT GIVE MY SON!"

* Is missing a word in the sentence unless his mom was really saying do not give my son.

4) "Graceful in victory that kid is." Hawkgirl said watching as he danced.

* When did Hawkgirl become Yoda?

Of course he has to be the dense protagonist.. just read the intro of Kyrie and couldnt stop the sigh.

Please update