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Very well written, I love it.

Fuck. Loved this so damn much. Can't remember the last time I've read a story that long entirely. You mister/ma'am, are amazing. GOD that writing. GOD that plot. It was all so soft, elegant, and smooth. I almost wish it were more jagged, abrupt, sometimes. I can't explain. I was so pleased when I saw it was M-rated and yet didn't have sex scenes, that was my major fear all throughout your story, and here I am, at the end, having read a gen story that manages to talk about serious subject such as manipulation, molestation, torture, complex feelings without making it a whole, awful and boring mess. Newt hates Grindelwald, even at the end (ESPECIALLY) and that's freaking beautiful cause I'm tired of all the shitty stories where torturing you equals tough love (wtf society, why are you even okay with people being fan of Killing Stalking, among other things...). Grindelwald was a goddamn monster in all his charismatic, compelling, handsomely glory (you get what I mean), and Albus was so cryptic and unnerving he felt like the real deal. I just wanted to punch his twinkling eyes so bad sometimes (not really, Jude Law's way too handsome for that). Newt was the cutest, most resilient bastard I've ever seen and GOD do I love the fact that you did not once say the word "homosexually", it was so freaking subtle and RIGHT for that era. Theseus' acceptance yet reluctance, Graves' firmness in his beliefs and likes... Just, wow. I dig subtlety. I was not a huge fan of Tina and Theseus's rom side plot, but it wasn't all that present so fine by me. Nothing much to say except that it's exceptional and so much bette than the actual movie (well you can't exactly make a movie about someone being tortured for pretty much the whole thing but oh well THE GODDMAN SUBTLETY and hidden criticism, and wow it's just elegant. I don't have better words to describe it). Gonna read the sequel. I'm saddened to see you wrote there was gonna be smut in it. Ruins a story if it's longer than 5 lines in my opinion. And more frequent that once every 100.000 words. Your story's still amazing, though. Thank you so much.

What? What? What? "Feeding someone's relative to them in some demented attempt at showing 'affection'." Please, PLEASE. Do not tell me that is the reason why Queenie was unable to identify what kind of meat she was eating in the previous chapter... No. God. You slip such subtle and yet shocking little things in your story... I'm never sure to interpret them correctly. (Btw the actual previous chapter is actually a copy of an older one? I don't know how it got there but I believe it's a mistake)

HA! I hate to comment on a story before I finish it but this part was so good "Theseus gave a snort of exasperated laughter at the remark and informed that while she was correct, there was strictly no way to apparate into or out of the Hogwarts grounds. Everyone knew that.". Mmh I can taste your sweet sweet pleasure in writing this oh so delightful satire of what happened in CoG. I LOVED this, thank you for it!

This is... wow so great! I know there is so much more in store for them! Can’t wait!

This was great! Thank you for writing! In the next one, can you make Dumbledore and Grindelwald share a moment? I would love to see that!

Your story is fantastic!

IDK if you're interested or not, but the German word you are using for pet refers to a companion animal is the zoological sense only.

Sorry for not commenting on the last one, I think it was awesome tho, as this one. Thank you very much for uploading the whole story, it was so nice to read. I'm for sure gonna be reading the sequel, I'm already so hyped for it. I can't wait for all the terrors Newt's experienced to come to light and everything.
You said that you're open for suggestions so I might have some ideas. Firstly, I would love to see more Scamander bromance (as always) and this ending also missed some kind of Goldstein sisters, especially Queenie's, input. Then I suggest Grindelwald getting hold of Newt for a second time - and maybe not by physical force and binding. Anyways, I'm excited for your own ideas, have fun with it.

Aww, don’t worry about it! It was an amazing ending to such an epic tale, by the definition of the word (though it sounds odd when you think about the fact that a decent chuck of the story was the protagonist getting tortured but who am I to judge that negatively?)! This story was super amazing and I can’t wait for the sequel story to be up and running! I’ll definately be there, reading each and every update until that one has to come to a close as well (and I mean that in the good way, in case you took that negatively, just being sure)! I can’t wait! Until then!

YES PERFECT PUN! (Sorry, I love puns, probably a little too much to be honest ;P) It’s no problem, everyone gets writer’s block every once in a while, it happens! Great chapter, such accurate descriptions made it seem like I as the reader was in the room with them, observing! The way that Theseus is acting towards Percival makes perfect sense, as it makes sense for Theseus to feel kind of betrayed by a friend who prefers his brother. The reactions Newt had upon waking up in the hospital room seemed so natural that I almost didn’t think much of it until now. I can’t wait for the next update, and you can be 100% sure I’ll be reading the next story, too! Until then!

Amazing

Sooo good! Can’t wait to read on!

Love it. Love the idea of a sequel too