Im a bit behind on this story so you might have answered these questions if you got them. Why does Jaune's quirk amplify physical attributes and not quirks, why is Ren's quirk not shutting off his emotions (cause im pretty sure shutting off emotions wouldnt make him invisible to robots) and would Ruby having her physical attributes enhanced by Jaune really make her move faster when using her quirk (that seemed more like a quirk enhancement to me)

How could someone suddenly believe that there’s a person from another planet? Would the everyday citizen believe if someone said they were from another world? The first chapter just doesn’t work in my opinion, it feels unnatural that they would just believe Ruby.

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow~...

While mostly fight sences this is pretty good work and I hope to see more

excellent work on this chapter good fight scenes and glad they came up with a team name for Izuku, Ochako, Iida and Kendo

So this just another izuocha huh...

*sigh...*

The sorting for the final round is confusing!

Why does Ochaco suddenly have a southern accent?

good chapter also I can't wait for the battle to being

awesome work on this chapter

Finally, the Ice Flower duo have been reunited. But now Weiss is at least five years older than last time and is now a Pro Hero. Wonder when we are gonna find out what she had to go through without either her family’s wealth or her team to go pro. Till next time.

Can't wait to see what happens next time.

I like the story so far and how the people integrated but I think that you placed too many character in too fast. Some RWBY character like Cinder and Neo are fine since they place more danger cause the heroes to be more cautious. But others like Blake have no movement towards near Ruby and co that having them place in a random part of the chapter is weird. I do like the chapter you had to inform us of how she's doing but to me it seems that too many are coming too fast.

Good chapter also Izuku won this time interesting

excellent work on this chapter and very awesome and thank you for finally doing the umbrella joke