Reviews for On the Way to a Smile
dissectedfrog chapter 19 . 4/6
Amazing. I’m crying. This story gave me every emotion and I somehow related to it.
PiiRa chapter 17 . 3/12
What a beautifully written story! You did such a great job expressing all these feelings and it was just an amazing journey to follow. My absolute favorite 3
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 15 . 2/11
Ok, I thought there was gonna be something really really bad happen to Shane and Nathan in the moves, you scared the crap out of me! And that letter from Natalie's husband? Oh man, that's, I don't even know. I'm glad he's left her though. She deserves nothing better than prison.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 14 . 2/11
My gosh, Nathan is just an absolute shitshow. But so much like Shane too. It's amazing how Shane can use his experience to first help Julia, and now Nathan. Hopefully. And good for Marnie. I've never understood why Lewis felt the need to hide their relationship, I mean, mayors have wives, hello? Good for her kicking him away. Maybe he'll realize where his priorities should be.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 13 . 2/11
Seriously? Shane's dad? My gosh, it's like they clean up one mess just to get thrown into another! I can't even imagine this will end smoothly.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 12 . 2/11
Gotta be honest, was kinda hoping the boys were gonna take him down to the cliffs or something. But attempted murder, he'll be gonna for good this time.
And yay! Shame proposed! In complete Shane style too, lol!
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 11 . 2/11
Oh wow, that was beautiful and HOT! Very nice lemon. I'm so glad he was able to give himself to her finally. So beautiful.

And Linus is so freaking adorable!
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 10 . 2/11
Ok, Alex is a little better, but I still resent him a bit. Haley surprised me though, both when she gave Shane her 'approval', and now willingly hanging out with Maeve. I hope Shane will be able to fully trust Maeve soon, but I totally get why he's so scared.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 9 . 2/11
Ok, this chapter was like whiplash, lol! First Maeve's mom, then Shane's idiot therapist, then Tyler calling, and even Pam trying to drag him back down. Man, these two are troopers! They're just getting stronger together.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 8 . 2/11
Oh wow, that was intense. I thought you had just skipped that cutscene, you wrote it in so well, it made perfect sense with the plot. And Harvey cracks me up. I love the way you've written his character.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 6 . 2/11
Oh my gosh, that's horrible about Maeve. I feel like Shane could take care of him though. Get all that pent up anger out. But Maeve and Shane are really good for each other, patient and it seems like they are on the same page as each other. And with experiences like those, they can really understand each other and PTSD they each have.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 5 . 2/11
Aww, that end was sweet. And screw Alex. I've always disliked that dude - bro.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 4 . 2/11
Oh my gosh, that was horrible! Poor Shane. Not only does he have the trauma of the rape, but then he feels the Stigma that guys feel under that, like they're weak or something. Thank you for braving this subject. I'm glad he finally talked to Maeve about it.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 3 . 2/11
He's doing so good! And he saved Maeve! I love that name by the way.
Marjory Stewart-Baxter chapter 2 . 2/11
He's starting to warm up to her!
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