That melted puddle on the floor is me. That was perfect. Absolutely lovely way of writing it.

I have a 17 year old too. I think you are right and that people do not give teenagers enough credit. I am sure he would be overwhelmed in Harry's situation, but I also think that, like Harry, he would really try to do his best and would be there no matter what.

I loved the Harry and Ginny talk. That couple is one thing JKR definitely got right. I still hate the name Albus Severus though!

I have always thought that Andromeda was the HP character who suffered the most losses. She was kicked out of her family as a young adult, lost Sirius to Azkaban and then death and then lost Ted, Tonks and Remus. You did a good job showing some of that grief.

Your writing is so good. There’s little to no errors in most of it grammar wise and the story fits seemlessly with Rowlings, you’ve got talent. Please keep writing!

I loved what you said about adults not giving teens enough credit...it's so true!

Aww, sweet moment when Harry held Teddy for the first time...and fed/burped him!

omg I love Blvnk's work. this was so sweet and I loved it.

He ran into Fleur, but I'm pretty sure she doesn't count. Loved the chapter, can't wait till Harry brings Teddy to the Burrow to meet his family.

So sweet and earnest in a way only the best version of Harry can be.

A rich chapter...

All right...thanks for the new story!

How adorable! I love this chapter! It's so true about 17 year olds and how they kind of straddle this line between being really independent and needing help. I think you did an excellent job portraying both sides :)

Also, the title is kind of blah.

Loved this!

I think it should have remained a one shot like this, which is good, instead of turning it into a “story”. Teddy is sweet here.