Reviews for Lily and her husband Asta |
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Guest chapter 11 . 6/21 Let lily join golden swan |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/7 Continue your story I wana know more |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/7 I love your story can you please continue |
Arkona54 chapter 12 . 6/3 I think I should go where the blue rose, although I do not find much sense to that, how the romance of the couple will develop if they are in different castes, but anyway, surely find a way to accommodate the couple |
Warmachine375 chapter 12 . 3/15 Well, it looks like Sister Lily Aquaria accepted Asta's marriage proposal despite her excommunication from the church and followed him to go the Clover Kingdom capital where they and also Yuno intended to join the Magic Knights there. It would be kinda funny and/or interesting if Lily wanted to become a Wizard King just to get Asta and Yuno more than determined if they want to reach it themselves and she has a new goal in her life after being excommunicated from the church. As for the Magic Knight squad upon passing the exams, Lily should join Blue Rose led by Charlotte Roselei. Not only are the female Magic Knights of Blue Rose are supportive of Roselei's love for Yami, a fellow captain of the Black Bulls but they are very into romance and even one of said knights has a boyfriend she's secretly dating much to the surprise of Roselei and Sol Marron as shown in the manga. Lily would find herself surrounded by fellow Blue Rose members approving when they learn she is married to the Anti-Magic Asta from Black Bulls and the former nun can help Roselei admit her feelings for Yami and date him assertively instead of bottling it up. Plus it would be great to expand more on the other Blue Rose members like Puli Angel, Wainsley, Borja, and Risacca Ondell. It would be kinda hilarious when Black Bulls learn Asta is a married man and that he and Lily had unintentionally bridged the gap between Yami and Roselei to finally be on a relationship together despite being from different Magic Knight squads. I can't wait to see Lily take new levels of badass upon improving her Water Magic and probably take cues from Asta to train her physical body and fight in melee during spending their time together. Of course there will be a lot of trials and obstacles for Asta and Lily in their careers as Magic Knights but I know they can endure and face it together. Anyways, this is an intriguing Black Clover AU fic and I look forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :) |
Didd23 chapter 12 . 1/12 I'm glad to see a fic like this. The only other one doesn't have the best writing. I hope you update this soon, and put Lily in the Blue Roses. They seem like a good fit for her, and she'll need people who can understand what she did and why. |
ray chapter 12 . 11/26/2019 I enjoyed lily and her husband when will new chapters be coming out |
youjimout chapter 12 . 11/13/2019 Dudeee she needs to stick with asta at all times! Oh wait how about you make her be in the blue rose for a few days and boom! She joins the black bulls That way more drama and it would be dramatic for them not to know asta is married only to find out after lily joins right? |
Ryouta chapter 12 . 9/27/2019 Lanjutkan gan seru nihh |
EtheriousLogia chapter 6 . 9/1/2019 15 year old... eh not the weirdest thing I’ve seen |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/5/2019 Lily in the black bulls please :) |
Wicked.A chapter 12 . 8/5/2019 Yami could be casual with lily like he is with Vanessa while inwardly impressed and jealous of asta, finral would be outwardly jealous but also wanting asta to teach him his ways Noelle would be flustered at a the talk of marriage while the other black bulls would be rather chill (maybe charmy would like some advice for dating yuno later on) |
Wicked.A chapter 11 . 8/5/2019 I think lily should join black bulls |
Cr7Savage chapter 12 . 6/20/2019 Really great story. I've enjoyed all the interactions so far. I do think it's best if she joined the Black Bulls with Asta since they just got married and putting them apart so fast would just strain their relationship and the akwardness they feel would never go away. Plus having her have a rivarly with Noelle like many other reviwers have said is a pretty fun idea specially because they both use water spells. Looking forward for the next chapter |
DoomScar chapter 12 . 6/10/2019 please moreeeeee 3 |