Reviews for The Smiling Hero
Leafy-tan chapter 4 . 5/11
Update or I will kill you if ain’t already dead
SentinalSlice chapter 1 . 1/14
I really hope that this fanfic isn’t dead, it’s reallyninteresting and I’d love to see more of it. Please keep up the great work, and I hope that you update soon!
User003 chapter 4 . 12/9/2019
PLZZZZ UPDATEE!
PLZ OMG IT'S SO GOOD!
flowingzulu chapter 4 . 8/17/2019
Still hoping for next part to come soon but, then again, you have your own life to live Mr./Ms./Mrs Author sir/ma'am.
Vyc chapter 4 . 6/16/2019
Glad you're humbled but dude hurry up and continue the story man.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 4/6/2019
Now, revealing his(her?) age should be fun:-). Wonder if he picked Katsuki or Mirio?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/4/2019
good chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/4/2019
n a n i
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2019
Keep up the good work. Hope ch5 comes up soon
Fire chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
good chapter!
Starwing1995 chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
how about teamwork exercises during homeroom with eraserhead so class 1-A can make combo moves when working together
sonic chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
I liked the chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
Great. Now they'll have two teachers with no teaching experience.
WanderingSoul96 chapter 4 . 4/5/2019
Considering that Izuku/Nana isnt aware of any drawbacks of using their full power/adult form, I would suggest adding at least one (If you havent planned anything already). In the manga All Might used to be that hero that could always do the impossible, but was limited by his injury. If Izuku/Nana is better than that, having 100% power at all the time, then it would make the plot too easy for the most part (unless All for One uses tricks, like he does).

Anyway. It could be a faster aging rate, meaning that 1 minute in that form takes away 5, after all it is actually a 16 years old body trying to mimic an adult one and that must put some kind of stress. Or it could be that it takes a lot of food to sustain that form, or even that Izuku runs the risk of losing his personality, because Nana's mind can take control of him, even if she doesnt want to. It would be a full takeover, so to speak (I noticed the changes in personality)

But...You see, Im not really sure about how things will play out now. Izuku is still a teenager at the end of the day, can they even accept a job? Also, what class are they going to teach? The usual class with Mirio in Izuku's place? Im eager to know the rest, but as a writer I must advise you to be careful from now on. Im also doing a story where a character changes the whole plotline, and I take weeks thinking about what I should do with each chapter so I dont screw up everything.

But, good chapter.
Cyde chapter 4 . 4/4/2019
This... might be the most novel premise this fandom has produced in quite a while. Major, major points for that.

The only thing I might have changed would be to have Nana/Izuku seek out Toshinori immediately rather than waiting until he saw it on the news. Get everything above board as soon as possible.

Bearing in mind that Nana's existence is the result of a quirk - strange and rare as it might be - as long as it's registered and official, Izuku can't be accused of any sort of fraud or wrongdoing by hijacking a dead woman's body and soul.

As far as Izuku's gender is concerned, I personally believe it should be a one-way street. Izuku is getting a great deal of power along with a body - in its prime - suited to wield it. The drawback (as every quirk seems to have one) should be that there's no going back. At all. In golf, the rule is "play it as it lies." If you hit the ball into the tall grass at the base of a tree, you don't go pick the ball up and carry it back onto the fairway, you wade in there with your pitching wedge and start hacking away. Make lemonade from lemons.

However you choose to deal with it, I'm certain I'll enjoy it. I'll be reading.

All the best.
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