That was great! I especially liked seeing Crouch get caught.

Great story!
I hope you can come up with MORE Dumble mistakes. It's sooo amusing to see Dumbasadoor being "hoisted with his own petard". More, PLEASE!

I really believe that JKR intended to write Dumbles as a "good", but imperfect man- - - she did it INCORRECTLY. She actually portrayed him as an evil man...if you look at his deeds, and NOT his "intentions." The road to Hell is paved with good intentions. It's VERY appropriate here.

Please continue this, I'd love to see Dumbledork truly annihilated!

Good grins, and interesting thoughts. I do hope more of this comes forth at some point. Thanks for a great read!

Regards your grouse in your bio about poor spelling. I get the feeling that a lot of the younger writers are probably using a speech to text conversion software with spellcheck enabled. Ultimately between accents and the software's comprehension capabilities, the nearest sounding word that is in greater usage gets shoved in.

Nice one! Dumbledore's screw-up strikes again...

xxxxx Kudos xxxxx : )

That was great.

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A hilarious angle that I don't think I've seen anywhere ever, which is pretty rare in fanfiction.

I love how you dealt with the curse and the Crouches in one fell swoop. It almost felt like Padfoot had played the ultimate prank. First, he updated the wards and obviated himself and now he took care of that evil insane scum sucker Barty Jr, then swooped in and took out his dear old daddy.

I can't wait to see what is next.

Great beginning! I'm looking forward to more.

Well played Sirius. Upgrading the wards and then oblivating yourself of the knowledge. I love it. I am really excited about this story and cannot wait to see where you take it. Well written and a very good plot.

more please

Genius thank you for a great story

Okay, this was deliciously perfect in execution. Dumbledore being himself, down to the wire. I do so look forward to more of this.