Reviews for Impossible
twi-fic luver chapter 28 . 6/10
Congrats on finishing your fic!
I'm glad they were all able to figure eveything out in the end. :)
Anasamantha09 chapter 28 . 6/7
L. Mond: I just read this ending where you developed the beautiful life that Jasper and Edward finally deserve. I loved each of the episodes that you brought up because they were just to enjoy. And blush too, because I loved Jasper's intensity!
And well, I was a bit speechless the whole time I read and my heart was pounding for what you put in the beginning. I want to tell you that I speak and think in Spanish, and that Fanfiction is a place to read beautiful stories and practice my English. And although I love to comment if there is a good plot and how each chapter unfolds, how the characters grow and the endings come, I do not have enough vocabulary to make long appreciations. So sometimes I don't get to say everything that seems important to me to say, just to thank. And today you gave me a huge surprise saying that my brief comments had made you rethink this story sometimes. And I went to look for them and they were not so many, but they were from the heart because this story was so well carried out that it was worth commenting on what was happening. But it is the first time, and I have been reading for years, that an author says something publicly about my brief thoughts. So I also read with a smile. And if I make this long explanation, it is because I decided to write with google translate as a form of thanks. You deserved it. I thank you enormously as a reader, for this brave story of two brothers who fall in love, and for having finished it in these difficult times we are living on this planet. Thank you thank you thank you.
CentauRita chapter 28 . 6/7
**my hand, resting lightly upon my heart...in my other hand...a soiled tissue**

Oh, my,my,my...¡mas Dios! My Dearest L,

I. Am. Blubbering...Mess, of course, with gratitude and happiness.

Gratitude: For your thoughtfulness and for dedicating THIS, the final chapter of 'Impossible'. It humbled me right through my heart. Thank you. It was certainly my pleasure to read and review this, your impossibly fabulous story.

Congratulations on your achievement. Your words simply wove magic by breathing LIFE, into Tonton and Jade. It was a journey that was met by the highest hurdles life could throw at you, yet, you staid your course and, I know that Tonton and Jade are also thankful for their HEA. (Me, too! **sigh**) So, YES, I'm...full of Happiness.

Kudos to you, L...for an 'Impossible' story well done!

XxxHUGSxxX2U
CentauRita, NorCal Gal

P.S.
Took me about 8 minutes to read that final chapter.
I guess you can say...I devoured it...**smacking my lips**Mmmm, sooo tasty!
Thank you. ;D
Looking forward to more adventures of the Edward and Jasper kind.**Blushing, hotly**
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CentauRita chapter 27 . 6/1
**silently...SCREAMING! While cradling my face with both hands**

If you choose not to knock, before entering...you can't be angry or surprised at what you find or see. As what you have found or seen, are out of context.

Now, YOU are an intruder, so, you must listen! And ALLOW an explanation of the situation you just witnessed, out of context.

Could it be just a simple statement?

"Tonton, I love you and I'm ready for you to come Home now."

A rackus-frakus cliffie, of a chappie, there L.
**Harumphing! loudly, bet you can hear me** ;P

Loved your update, (even with all my silent screaming and my harumphing)
[Okay, I did a little squirming, too] Hope you're happy!
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
Anasamantha09 chapter 27 . 5/31
Ohh, you are going so fast! But good! Jasper is back. I think that the kiss doesn’t matter to him, that they have to talk about other things. And be happy. Let us see a bit of this life. And thank you!
PRO-BETA chapter 26 . 5/31
Nooooo, finish it, pleaseeee
Anasamantha09 chapter 26 . 5/28
So good! Jasper is more adult now than his family and Edward. He needs to learn again about this new kind of love about his parents. Edward is being very blind about this issue.
CentauRita chapter 26 . 5/28
Aptly named chapter: Rupture

What is that adage?

Ah, 'No pain, no gain'?

If only Jasper had taken his father's quite sage advice: 'Listen to him.
'Don't judge his actions before you know his reasons okay?'

Well, that tidbit went right out of the window, didn't it? So...pain it is.

Gaaaaw! I so want to gently throttle Jade for not taking sound advice, thus, possibly saving the additional pain of separation for him & Tonton.

It's a long drive back to Hanover for an emotional Tonton and he'd better pay keen attention to the road and stay alert while driving. Accidents can happen and Jade would never, EVER recover, if something were to happen to his Tonton by following his last words:

'I need you to go and stay away.'

My heart is clinched.

Awesome update, L and thank you.
XxxHUGSxxX2U
CentauRita, NorCal Gal ;D
acw1 chapter 26 . 5/22
:)
ashtonmargaretti chapter 25 . 5/20
I don't normally leave reviews. but I read this entire story in 2 and a half hours. I got to the end of this chapter and woke my roommate up because it ended. I don't want to be the one who asks but when will this be updated. I absolutely loved this story. as evidence of how fast I made it through.
CentauRita chapter 25 . 3/20
*# SPLAT #*

Here we goooo. Sucked into the Vortex!

(Weeee, I'm getting dizzy from spinning...round and around!)

Dearest L,
Thank you for your update...Loved it!
Hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself in these tumultuous times.

XxxHUGSxxX2U
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
acw1 chapter 25 . 3/17
Great
Anasamantha09 chapter 24 . 2/22
Excellent! Thank you for the way you are carrying the plot!
CentauRita chapter 24 . 2/21
Way to pull the rug out from under me.

Thought I just about had everything figgered out.

But, kept the truth, close to YOUR chest.

I mean, we're in the same Country just inna different State.

Your plot twist was freeking Awesome. I certainly wasn't expecting it, But, I simply was gobsmacked by your writing skills. I love it when an Author can surprise me!

Well...you certainly...Did It!

Loved the chappie, thank you.

You RoCk, L,
CentauRita, NorCal Gal
twi-fic luver chapter 23 . 1/20
I'm looking forward to reading what's next! I particularly can't wait for when Edward confronts his parents about the DNA results.
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