J'ai adoré. Vous avez une plume tellement différente. C'était romantique, poétique et parfois psychédélique. Merci beaucoup. Bonne continuation.

Your writing style is so unique!

Really enjoyed this story.

Simply excellent throughout. Would love to see it published too. It definitely deserves to be.

Loved it! Great read.

I love it

Interesting story given the style in which it is written and the modern adaptation.
Little angst, a chase, some messing around, but a delightful tale, very much Darcy and Elisabeth!
Thank you!

I love the Queen reference :)

favorite part: you have to try, you promised. And the deleted text

I love this story, the writing style is so emotional, and some funny bits. My favorite funny bit was when they snubbed the waiter in their souls. I only wished that the story was longer.

A couple of tiny continuity issues:
in chapter 12 Louisa has a boyfriend but in chapter 3 Louisa had a husband. I guess she might have both... this is a modern fic after all. And here Elizabeth hadn't seen Richard since Hunsford pub, but Richard was in the party Jane threw at the Philips apartment in chapter 7.

Again brilliant

What a fun little story! I love the way you worked original dialogue into a modern tale. Nicely done!

This was a clever read! Your dialogue was so fun to dive into that I was quite sad when it ended.

I love the poetic quality in your writing, it creates such a lovely atmosphere. Deliciously emotional, thank you for writing!

Oh my! This is absolutely brilliant!