Reviews for Tsunami
Debbie Hicks chapter 8 . 2/7
9. Chapter 9 then Rose, your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thought Tiv Tiver Narooon! echoing mre powrful the hair grew in a alarming rate had Pointed ears and had rich Sch'n T'Gai slanted eyebrows then the seer found me fully but activating Telepathic focusing my brain then toolate a pure white alien vortex forged a self-defensive mental and physical telepathic shield then the Cane shifted into my Garnet time rod was in fact clad in Vulcan robes/cloaks with my new ma'at symbols was not normal hair was short like T'Pau's with bangs framing my face was in fact not human remembered as all of it gained a alien power from the snakes were from the planet Vulcan became touch-telepathic by psychic touch Alice hair grew back abnormally what are you I am a Vulcan bred to peace what this fabric came from gasp hair again Alice she is a Syrannite by who Surak we need witnesses of your powers just awakened then in time healed from the injury then the Venom was both then had eight kids from tubes were hybrids blew up with bitten best friends with they torn freely Nothingness with three brought there good no longer they broke rule you Irina/remains lied of her/they they were turned by snakes illegally with they sliced rest killed her/they bring them with the others good you are put to death the verdict is execution then ATOMIZED By vaporizing good tore they suffered like her torn heads are punished the All of Volturi guards bitten as all of it then too late was already immortal but it really happened us/they met the witnesses she's not normal train her of her powers Smashed tore both brought there cursed to wander on my planet a lot of voices angry then I Let loose a Command holding my talisman higher with power and authority was a Matriarich of as all of Vulcan had religious freedom but rights KROYKAH! Sir! she is married has kids with they had kids eight are rare where you picked up this alien language oh my god you mind melded us/they are linked we are Syannites in time never was alive the world did evolve but changed too far faster the bodies were thinner blew up then lost from here then more as all of them in time myself was Vegetarian improved in miuntes spoken to alien but galactic languages far more fiery Alice she is clad in her Starfleet uniform heel-boots pointed ears upswept eyebrows hair grew long again had not changed was my beauty carried in death myself never died or went elderly was walking more alien but extraterrestrial then myself tried for my husband mouth was closed a galactic far deepest but not so human but or both Echoing vibrating very loudly but truest but real : Do you Remember we first met imzadi remember we fell in love again remember What I Taught you Can you Still Sense my own Thoughts at all Husband he heard my thoughts was touched united spirit soul and body as one oh my god Carlisle she is my long-term wife and imzadi gasp what it means please Beloved it's Betazoid in time so they my recovery went far too Starfleet marine but was More Federation powerful regained my memories and my katra the newspapers took a photo of myself married to a Betazoid was Vulcan mind-melded him by linking our minds was Stoic but attained Kolinahr Mother yes daughters sons we found imzadi no Thy'la gasp they know you are not human but from different planets so they they had kids in time never aged but haven't went old of it nuked freely the blew up good they are Deceased they are lost but no longer as all of Volterrans heirs as all to each three more than as all of them nuked were with human blood.
Kayozm chapter 8 . 12/7/2019
I definitely liked it. A nice glimpse into their lives.
Coffeefilterart chapter 8 . 11/22/2019
I love that you added an additional chapter. Your descriptions of Bella’s vision made sense along with her frustration. But I also appreciate her gratitude for being alive. This was a realistic portrayal of long term injury and a true example of loving someone in sickness and in health.
MammaNita4 chapter 8 . 11/21/2019
Nicely done! You did it justice!
ImJustBeingAwesome chapter 8 . 11/21/2019
Literally amazing. I love the aftermath of Bella’s injuries and I love how they are portrayed in this. You put real emotion in this and I really appreciate it. You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue writing stories like this
trisha63 chapter 8 . 11/20/2019
Great ending to a fantastic story. Bella could've easily told Edward to change her at anytime but she held fast and stayed human through all of her pain, but she didn't. Now she adapting to her brand of normal and still. Take care, Trisha :}
valentina.delafuente chapter 8 . 11/20/2019
Me encanta
Hetwaszoietsals chapter 8 . 11/20/2019
This is such a good story! Thanks for the bonus chapter! Amazing as always!
valentina.delafuente chapter 7 . 8/25/2019
Exelente historia eras la única persona que ha escrito algo así te felicito
ImJustBeingAwesome chapter 3 . 8/24/2019
This is probably the fifty millionth time I’ve read this story, and Bella saying “I’m ok” to everything has got me in my feelings.
Reinbeau chapter 7 . 5/17/2019
Needs that bonus to really ties up the loose ends.

thank you for sharing your story.
JuleKiwi chapter 7 . 5/14/2019
Yes please to the bonus chapter! V cool fic
princeselisa chapter 7 . 5/9/2019
:)
NeeNee246 chapter 3 . 5/8/2019
OMG! I wonder if Alice saw anything? If they are on their way or sent help? OMG! Is he going to change her? I have to go and find out! o.o
NeeNee246 chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
OMG! O.O This is...WOW!
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