Reviews for Pain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am not one to review fics much. this said I like this one so I have to say option 2 |
![]() ![]() Option 2 :)) Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Option 2! I like this story and can't wait to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() OPTION 2! And why do all the good stories have ta mess with my Loki?! (No I am not an fangirl in his army, I command it. Original Mythological fan of Loki trump MCU fan every time.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the concept you have thought up. Hope you continue on |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...what will happen to Peter? Toby knows that his Underloo is always going to look for him, hopefully Loki doesn't know his relationship with the kid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I know it’s been a while since I’ve read this so I just read the last chapter and this is getting interesting. |
![]() ![]() I love it it’s truly amazing and please keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! Glad to see you writing again! |
![]() ![]() I can’t stop reading it can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Hey so I’m actually friends with the person who wrote this and I’m really swept bye how good this fan fiction is and you have so much talent I’m beyond amazed keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Dang you’re only 11? This is pretty good. I hope you don’t get discouraged and opt to keep writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this story is super great! I love your writing. Especially for just being an 11 year old, you've got quite a lot of talent! Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() Hey, this story is super great! I love your writing. Especially for just being an 11 year old, you've got quite a lot of talent! Keep up the great work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh yay! Please do add that kid. That’s be interesting to see. Poor Tony. |