I think you did a good job with Ziva. She was always mean to DiNozzo in the show. I haven't watched the later ones after she moved away, so I don't know if it changed. But I still don't like Ziva.

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I absolutely love this story. A great way to bring Tali in while still keeping the boys together and dealing with Ziva. I do like that Tim wasn't quite the idiot he is in other stories but just the dupe that was so naive. Abby still needs to get her head out of her arse and yay for Ellie being on Tony's side.

El inglés no ES mi idioma, lo leo pero no lo escribo correctamente pero me gustaría qué pudieras traducir esto, respeto las preferencias sexuales de cada persona y estoy de acuerdo en la forma que cada quien escribe sus historias, pero en lo que no estoy de acuerdo es en que para hacerlas se denigre a la mujer haciéndola una tramposa y falta de ética como este fanfiction pinta el personaje de Ziva David y no porqué sea fan de ella, si no porque no me parece en mi condición de mujer que se retrate a otra mujer de la manera que usted con mi debido respeto escribió de ella, para llevar a cabo su historia con haber omitido su personaje era suficiente y también se me hace un una falta de respeto a los muchos muchos seguidores de TIVA.

I choose to think that Ziva went to the Sperm Bank

I choose to think Ziva went to the Sperm Bank myself~~~

Much better ending for Tony and Jethro

Amazing! Update soon.

This is how it should have been. Love it.

At least Tali is too young to remember any of the deceit that surrounded her short life.

Você e eu tivemos a mesma ideia de Senior ser o pai de Tali,mas na minha cabeça o time ficaria contra Tony quando ele pedisse o DNA , ele iria para Fornel que estava investigando Senior daria mais algumas provas para poder prende-lo . Com a ajuda do FBI ele assumiria a paternidade de Tali e iria embora para Londres onde ele conheceria e se apaixonaria por Harry Potter que está criando Teddy. O time de Gibbs encontraria com o casal Potter e Tony teria a oportunidade de dizer as verdades que eles merecem ainda teria contato e amizade com Fornel e Palmer

Brilliant!

What a great way to end it. Well done. Honestly didn't really like the tie in to "Oh Ziva and Tony had a kid together" when we NEVER saw them intimate.