Moh, this has been another great fanfic from you. Yugioh is clearly a passion for you, but you do just as awesome in this Kingdom Hearts fanfic. I always loved BBS, but I had certain problems with it, one of them being the way the main characters aren't as deeply fleshed out as I would have liked. This story, in my opinion, totally corrects that and goes an extra mile to make them more colorful and humanly relatable. Ignis is a great addition, a spice that this story needed (you're right, there should have been more fire-based friends than just Axel!), and I like so much how her impish personality forces the other characters to take a step up in character. She is so fun and amusing to watch, and so likeable too you'd almost want her to be like your sibling. I bet she'd find food nicknames for anybody. :D

I can't wait to read more and more of this story. I'm so glad I discovered your profile only somewhat recently, so I have so much to read. XD

not gonna lie, wasn't that bad. the darker the better

i actually want to hear about the whole "experience "

You know, I've seen this serie called Inuyasha, and in that serie, the main character's half-brother, Sesshomaru, losses his left arm in battle. He holds a big grudge since. But much later in the serie, during an important battle, Sesshomaru finally lets go of the grudge, of the past, and when he does, his missing arm magically grows back, and along with it, he gets a sword to call his own.
I just thought, maybe…. just maybe, during the battle against Master Xehanort and Vanitus, Ignis can finally let go of her fears and doubt ( or whatever you decide ), and a light shines from where her missing arm is, and when the light dies out, Ignis has a new left arm, and along With that arm, a new Keyblade, making her a two Keyblade weilder, like Roxas?
I respect whatever you decide, but what do you think?

May Phoebus, Quasi, Esmeralda, and the rest of the poor souls rest in peace.

Pog chapter. Looking forward to more.

maybe you should rename yourself as mage of despair, cause jesus christ this chapter, ignis needs therapy asap

Well, damn. This was just depressing.

Wow that was a lot to take in... poor Ignis :( I understand that actions have consequences so I understand how some of those things happened because of her intervention. But it still makes me sad for her. Quite a turn this story has gone through huh? All I want is for her to be happy. Someone please help this poor girl out! (Aka I miss Vanitas lol)

Anyways, good work so far! I understand tatking breaks cause sometimes people need them but I am glad that you are still pulling though with this story. Trust me, I am going to be here till the last chapter! Also, I hope you stay safe and I look forward to your next update :)

hope she ends up in a world that can give her a new arm, bc yikes!

This was a tough arc to swallow, bc break the cutie happened, and happened hard. I only hope vanitas comes in soon. bc Iggy needs some loving or just a person who knows her.

and yes, i got the horror of that period and man, its just terrifying what could happen. Is that world just forever covered in darkness after this? bc I can see how it was put to sleep in dream drop distance. it should honestly just stay asleep.

Oh my god

Kingdom Hearts 3 revealed that Master Xehanort's eyes used to be silver before they became that evil gold. Maybe, just maybe, in your version of the games, his reason for his actions, besides what he says in the game, can be that he wished for the Argentum clan to take back their rightful place?

VANITAS WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GET HERE MAN!

I love your work! 3 i have been keeping up with this stoary since the early chapters and i hope you keep it up!

VANITAS WHERE ARE YOU MAN?

Love your work 3 ive been following since the early chapters and i hope you keep this great work up!

Hey with all due respect I love your writing and the effort you put into your chapters but I really did just need to comment on where this story went so far. I completely respect the use of adult/darker themes to help develop characters. I even read somewhere thatCharacters are like geodes. In order to see them at their most beautiful, you have to break them.” Which I completely agree with, but it’s just the way you’ve laid out these extremely dark themes is just too much for me. I don’t mind drastic change in tones of a story as long as it dives into them with steady pacing. I’m not saying that you came out of left dodge with the slaughtering and assault as it was hinted that the story would be hitting more dark points before. My problem stems from the handling of how you forced literally the darkest themes you could in writing onto your main character not just within the same world, but within the same three chapters back to back with no breaks in between. I do love that you go into description and length to really unwrap the world you are spinning up in your head, but these are like 10k word chapters we’re talking about. And three of them no less! By this chapter, seeing what you put your character through, it literally felt like I was reading misery/torture porn for 30 thousand words. I’m sadly not hyperbolizing when I say it was a struggle to try and finish any of the chapters. I was begging to myself that Ignis’s suffering would end anytime, that Vanitas, Ventus, anyone! Would interfere and make the scenes stop. Even as a extreme horror fan that’s used to these types of horrific scenes and scenarios, these past few chapters were grueling and unpleasant to read. Not in a great ‘the story is making me feel emotions’ way but rather a ‘disgusted this is not fun to read’ way. I completely understand you putting in so much detail about Ignis’s suffering to get the reader’s to really feel for her, but the way you’ve set this up and written it out just makes it feel like shock value. Please take this comment as criticism and not as me flaming you, but in the future, please try to lengthen these type of scenes so that they don’t drag out to long. I always enjoy your writhing and want to see your stories succeed, so please for both the sake of your readers and for Ignis, let this unbearable suffering truly pay off to make your characters and plot evolve to the best way they could be.