sorry, that was meant to say “my poor otp. loved this, though!” hehe.

ahh, that was meant to say *my poor otp, i loved this, though.

ouch, my heart, my poor this, though! your writing is lovely.

Wow, I love the emotional gutpunch of the last few lines! Poor May, Steven, and Hoenn in general XD

FoxChandelier
A response to your review at r/13154881/
Thank you for your review but unfortunately I’m not writing with the anime in mind. I prefer writing about the games which is why I have the category tagged as games. If I was writing about characters from the anime I would do as you suggest so, regardless, thank you for your concern but it’s not needed XD

Nice work! I really love the vivid imagery and the transition of happiness and bliss to horror and shock. Despite the fact that the ending was bitter, I thought the beginning was very sweet and tranquil. Overall I liked this a lot!

If you already got St's review you shouldn't get it again... you're one of those who think ignoring it world work aren't you?

You are not even trying to block them are you?

[This isn't tagged as anime fic, which means people searching for it can't find it. That's unfortunate! Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it.]

As someone from experience this is unneeded.

This isn't tagged as anime fic, which means people searching for it can't find it. That's unfortunate! Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. Find your story under “Manage Stories” and select it from the dropdown menu that says “World: Any” in the “Category” section.