Reviews for Whole Milk |
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Rider09 chapter 1 . 6/1/2019 pls write more! |
Ben56 chapter 1 . 1/15/2019 Good story, i wanted to find a story whit Cathyl in a romantic and passionate moment either whit Kimihito or an OC. I will like if you make another whit the minotaur girls from the milk farm, whit Cara, Shizu, Miru and the others. Thank you for the story, i will be reading your other stories to. |
Rebmul chapter 1 . 1/12/2019 id love to see more and the girls response to him knocking up cathyl |
daniel2610994 chapter 1 . 12/31/2018 Hooly shit man, this was awesome and pretty hot, even if it was short it was pretty interesting to see how kimihito found a way to not get in trouble while also having his way with his girls, I really do hope you make more of these with the other girls too. |
Earth Dragon Arnighte chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 See, it’s stuff like this that makes me hopeful for a second season. |
Kowaba chapter 1 . 12/25/2018 *takes off reading glasses* Hmph. Seems to be quite the tale. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Thanks for writing it. Not only am I entertained, you made the MM fic section grow just a little. However, there are a few things to note. Nothing major, just some minor problems. I did not particularly agree with how Kimihito acted in this story, I would think he'd be a bit more bashful even with his experience. And I didn't like his excuse for no vaginal penetration the first time around. Also, this could be because you are a novice lemon writer, but I felt like Cathyl's body was lacking description. Other than those grievances, I'd say this is a fine story! Good job! |
FanFictionHunter chapter 1 . 12/25/2018 Congratulations on getting this out. But if you want the Seiryu smut, Ko will probably want your end of the trade up front. |