Reviews for Tailored For Vengeance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where is the update seriously? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic definitely deserves more attention. Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this supposed to be a repeat of chapter 1? because it definitely isn't the 4th chapter i think you meant to post... |
![]() ![]() That's what makes stereotypes so funny: the fact that deep down, they're rooted in truth. |
![]() ![]() where is chapter 5 of tailored for vengeance? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Ryuko is a much softer version of Satsuki but still her hotheaded self. I like, I like. Plus, the fact that you are using Kinue who is totally not a spy but a Tactical Espionage Expert (TEE) is great too. Plus that last scene of those two guys kidnapping Mako. At least they are polite about it. Most guys, won't even help their kidnapie into the trunk. I like this idea since its something new and fresh. So, keep at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This shows a lot of promise. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... Nui Matoi(Harime) the main character and hero of this history?... He He He he... This should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been waiting for a while now for someone to write a half-decent Protag!Nui fic, and it looks like my wish has been granted, if you can keep up the overall quality (spelling, grammar, writing, scenery etc.); don't take it too hard though if you don't get hundreds of reviews, seeing as how KlK is already 5 years old - but just because it's not the new kid on the block doesn't mean it can't make for good reading material. tl;dr I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter; keep it up! |