Reviews for Invincible |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You keep making me cry! Btw, we half-way believed 2012, but I kept thinking what if the translators got the translations wrong? What if the actual date is supposed to 12/21/21? Or even 12/22/21? I guess we'll find out. ;D Sad but good story! MelJ :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No dormi leyendo esta historia, demasiado buena! |
![]() ![]() Your stories are gripping, thrilling tales. I very much enjoyed this one. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like, very much. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't care about the previous reviews. this is great. nothing has to be scientifically perfect. this is FICTION. how I wish magic is real and I am a witch. I'm on chapter 4 and this is awesome. I can't wait to see where the story goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pregnant Hermione is kinda a mess |
![]() ![]() ![]() “ Happy 2019. Let's hope we survive it.” Well, we did, but 2020... This is intriguing so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() if muggles cant handle magic what would happen if a mage and a muggle have sex? funny how no one ever talks of rescuing the muggles fron earth. and really the sollution is living on a cilinder on space? there are 50k mages, that should be more then enough to start a new population no? yet for some reason you keep insisting to join with the muggles. it seems rather forced. religion and prophecy both subjects that deteriorate the brain and promote violence and it happens to be you focal point of your story. it is the reason i could never bring myself to watch bsg or read your final chapters. story is very well written but the plot was not all that great |
![]() ![]() ![]() the trunk of newt scamander didnt need artificial gravity, yet that trunk was tossed around in all directions. so why does your ship need it? expanded areas are pocket space, space not connected to the outside. a bubblehead charm gives oxygen yet they make trees to help them. if a small space can be expanded hunderds of times and a big space only about 50 then why not build many small spaces to expand? i think you are wasting a potential magical sollutions |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* the entire premise of your story is wrong. earths magnetic field protects the world from solar radiation, if the sun is acting up and penetrating this and killing magicals why would the solution be to leave this protected field and take it head on? if you can create such radiation shielding you could do the same on earth. if the radiation will heath up the core of the earth and start erupting volcano's then the obvious solution would be to set them off in a controlled way. impossible for muggles but with magic? this would take off the pressure and thus no tsunamis or massive ash clouds |
![]() ![]() ![]() The math for the surface area is a bit off. However if you change it to 60 klicks long and 2.5 klicks in diameter you get that "just under 1000 sq km" you're looking for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome. My favourite story of yours, I think :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been waiting for these two peoples to meet. I am enjoying this a lot thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, but the names in this chapter alone were all over on the misspellings. Otherwise, fantastic story! |