why the hell are there so many of these betrayal guardian stories

Turnaround was a bit too fast, but the rest of the story was well written.

I was impressed with how you handled the whole guardians plot line from their origins to the unintentional consequences from suddenly having immensely powerful beings aiding the demigods.

Overall, the interactions seemed well within reason and understandable based on gm the given context; however, I do feel that Percy’s reaction to his identity’s reveal was too drastic. While you were clear that he wanted to keep his mask on, you did not foreshadow any real reason why, so his emotional reaction was a complete surprise. While he had his mask on, he did not seem particularly broken; and even with his identity revealed, he just seemed strangely cowardly with wanting to flee from his friends. He’s supposed to be a badass guardian who was training for 15 years, and he was completely stoic behind the mask. The sudden change was just that, sudden.

Goddammit, you actually make the hunters have some semblance of dignity. Sure they may be biased, but I am glad you didn’t make them needlessly cruel to someone who is being kind to them as many other authors unfortunately do.

Hm. The 1st chapter has me interested instead of something I feel like I have to endure to get to the good parts.

The writing is fluid, clear, and free of grammatical errors.

I feel like this would be more popular if you add the Percy and Artemis character tags. I always do my searches with the Percy character tag, but this would not have shown up in that despite being a story that I would actually read. I would not have found it if I wasn’t looking at recently updated stories and saw the sequels and luckily checked your profile page for the entire series.

I knew it was Percy all alone yet you built suspense in me with your incredible writing. I was actually eating popcorn as I read and I thought it was funny... like one of those scenes from a movie or tv show hahaa

This is such a unique plot! I really love it a lot! It's so different from every other guardian story I've read and I'm really excited to keep reading!

Yesssssss

Um... once they realize that Telionix is on the opposing side, why can't they fight? (I mean the gods)

I love this story so much! Please update this again soon!

Please update this great story again soon! I can’t wait for Annabeth to realize that Percy is back!

Love the updates! Good job. Thanks again for the quick updates and I’m hopping for another soon!:)

I haven't read a percy Jackson fanfic in like a year and a half because there was nothing original so I was expecting some original stories but nope still the same betrayal guardian of the hunt percy x Artemis bull shit

To the concerned Guest Review This is My personal account on here until CSP2708 makes a Fanfction Dot Net Account for Children of the Gods but thanks for being concerned

I've read this before on wattpad. Do you have another account there? or was this story up for adoption?

Ooo...this is good. Please update soon because I want to find out what happens.