kallen is nice add...hope for lelouch and cc reunion sooner tho...

this chapter is long...but it's a good read...feels interrupted at the end part tho...

this is kinda dark...still interesting prologue tho...

why no continuation of this beautiful?! i wanna read his rebellion with CC! we read too much kallen and didn’t get enough of cluclu! pls comeback to this one too! along with ur other wonderful works!️

I Love the Throne of Glass series! So, glad (and surprisingly) to meet a fellow Sarah J Maas fan! I hope you get to finish this story!

I hope the author is doing well, and also I miss this one. heehee.

Interesting

The reunion of Lelouch and CC was hilarious. But they are both so stubborn :D
It was nice to see Suzaku. I hope we will se some more interactions between him and Lelouch.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

So Lelouch wants to start a rebellion to overthrow the emperor. That sounds familiar :D But I still want to learn more about his precise reasons and motivations.
I like the ending with the dramatic words of the emperor. It creates a thrill of anticipation

My god...

...throne of glass combo fic. I almost forgot about Arobynn existing in the series but after reading then checking I remember him now, and I'm already excited for this fanfic.

Just asking though if you are going to follow the books plot loosely, will you split Celaena/Aelin between CC and Lelouch, with Lelouch the lost prince and CC the super powerful elf?

This is brilliant! Looking forward to the next chapters. I thought Kallen’s backstory was pretty darn good if I do say so myself. Can’t wait to know who sold C.C out!

Then I guess I have just get used to the fact that Lelouch is a skilled fighter in this world :D
Nice chapter. And I have just realized that in the original series CC was the witch and thereafter Lelouch became a warlock. Here it is the other way around. Lelouch became a warlock first of all and afterwards CC got the corresponding title witch.
Furthermore, I was glad to see my boy Jeremiah!

Glad to see you’re getting straight into some action, and have also diverged away from your, let’s call it inspiration, instead of a retelling of Throne of Glass. I’ve always been curious of how the plot may have turned out should Sam have been alive once Celeana came back from Endovier, so I’m looking forward to seeing how a combination of my favourite books and anime can fill that gap. One thing I do have to ask and hope you can answer is if you’ll be omitting the whole ‘Aelin’ aspect of the story, and everything that comes with the territory of her family’s unique origin. It wouldn’t really make sense, but who cares it’d spice up the story quite a lot. Looking forward to chapter three!

Very intriguing and engaging. So far I'm liking the direction you are taking with this story and I definitely look forward to reading some more. I enjoyed the prologue as well as this chapter... The prologue really had me hurting for C.C. as she was only 14(?) At the time and had to endure damage more harmful than the physical wounds she deemed lesser. I look forward to these characters growing.
I also really like how you give fine details in describing how a person feels inwardly, the look in their eyes, the atmosphere of the room, etc. It's something I personally feel like I lack in quality when it comes to my own stories.
Anways, good work, and again I look forward to reading more whenever you can update on your own time. I understand the hassle of finding time to write and edit whilst juggling life's responsibilities.
Sorry for the long review.

I do not know Throne of Glass but this story sounds very interesting so far. I hope Lelouch and CC will meet again soon.
Looking forward to learn more about Lelouchs wrath against Britannia (maybe it is similiar to the series).
Honestly, for me it is hard to imagine especially Lelouch as an assassin considering his lack of physical abilities. I guess he focus more on his intelligence and charisma.