Well, now I shall wait for the sequel. I liked the part where you wrote the mechaniques. Now we will wait to see if Lincoln can fix this. And if he wants to.

Just got done reading this story I liked way more than I thought I would I hope you make a sequel also if Sam and Luna are immune because they're bi then why did Maggie get affected she's also bi

I gotta say, If the sequel story to this is to be made, I can't help but feel how Angela would stalk Lincoln.

The refrence is from freddy got fingered.

Ah sad to see that story is over, but this is just the smutty first arc and next arcs will be less smutty from now on? I did think Lincoln was dangerously going overboard especially when Albert told him things to avoid and Lincoln breaks those rules. Dealing with older girls he takes their lead more. But yeah it maybe was a mistake author didn't use short time jumps with Lincoln and girl #N leaving bedroom/bathroom/closet. I like the smut but if you're not used to it or use it too often you get reminded by readers and asked "Where's the plot?" Hope to see New arc soon but I'd like to see more of your other storiee, the yandere sisters I'd like to see more of!

Awesome as always Whim!

OK you need to continue this

I'm really surprised to find out you don't like doing sex scenes considering how good the ones you've written actually are. I've read quite a few in my time and yours are honestly some of the best I've ever seen, especially when the story isn't even a PWP. You've got a terrific sense for eroticism, for flow, for how to compose it so the heat and lust the characters share enjoy a steady build throughout before being punctuated by those great, fiery climaxes where they consume or lose themselves in each other. It feels really wonderful and natural, and I really appreciate how the characters really seem to be helpless in the grasps of their passion. Most of the time when someone isn't skilled at writing sex it'll feel rote and mechanical instead, like something to get out of the way, or worse: unconfident. You want the reader to be basking in that atmosphere of unhinged desire and not many writers can really do it. You, though? Zap's have come off incredibly sultry, hugely alluring. I actually really enjoy them and consider myself a big fan.

But regardless, I'm a fan of all your writing, not just your sex scenes. I think part of the reason they feel so good anyway is because you do such a great job writing the characters in general, so when their interactions ultimately escalate to sex the chemistry is wonderful. It feels like a logical, expected development between two people I already really like. That's probably the secret, how you get the readers to care about the characters in the first place...Well, in any case, the quality is undeniable as far I'm concerned.

Ultimately I can't say I'm not disappointed you plan to ease off on that kind of thing in the future, but like I said, I really love your writing and your fics regardless so I'm still super excited for the sequel. Zap has been such a crazy, sexy, funny ride. I've really had a ball reading about this cute little boy getting rolled over by his sisters and other ravenous, sexy women just because of a quirk in his biology. It feels right to me, honestly. Lincoln getting cornered by needy girls feels natural to everyone involved, and I don't want him to ever be able to escape! Suffer your fate, kid! Next time try being less adorable!

Anyway, please keep up the amazing work, dude. I haven't yet been let down by even one update of yours. You're a terrific author.

I actually enjoyed the smut being in every chapter.

Though I can understand taking a break from it every once in a while.

I would like if there were to be more sex scenes in the next story too. As long as you still get to right the sequel with what you're also comfortable with as well.

Overall, fun story.

Huh, but who do they know that fits the category of descendant? I’m surprised he’s surprised his plan just revolves into sex-LOL

While it does suck, this story has end so quickly, I understand & respect your decision behind.

It's a shame that you decided to finish the story there but it's your decision
and all that remains is to accept it
in any case a question will you update loud bot

Bro that reference is from that episode of 'Blind Date'

Ok so there will be a reboot?

Kinda of sad to see this end but looking forward to the next part. :)

I'm not sad this story ended, because then you could start on the sequel and put more focus on Age Gap. I just had another question, did you really intended to write Carlota story?

Because if you do, just don't hog Bobbie Fletcher. I had plans for Bobbie Fletcher.

This story has been an amazing journey, but I am not unhappy with the results of this last chapter.

Just make sure to focus on Age Gap.

Which remind me, answer me in PM or in Age Gap question section, but did Age Gap gonna end in happy note or cliffhanger?