I really enjoyed your fanfiction.

Great story with an excellent OC!

Thank you also a fan of Fairy Tail here's something you can do Lucy the princess and Natsu the Criminal.
Cause that's how there seen.

Patty should have been in the movie well done bro

AWESOME! I always loved stories where Brian gets a girl because I really felt bad when he left detention as the fifth wheel.

Update, please!

This is pretty good so far! Looking forward to rrading more :)

can you do a special chapter about Vernon
going to court for raping her please.

Did vernon rape her my god

Damn. See, why didn't they do this with Brian? Awesome!

Sweet story! You are such a talented writer and I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!

Whoa. Seems like from the usual confession that Brian is in detention for something else? Now I'm extremely curious and can't wait for that to unfold.

Nice. I alwayd felt that Brian had the most to explore as a character despite the very popular characters of Bender, Allison, and Andrew. Nothing against them or Patty and Claire, but I felt for a long time that Brian was always overlooked and I'm glad that by this chapter's ending dialogue that you're digging more deep.

Great! This is what TBC needs! More Brian fics! I'm really loving your OC Patty. Can't wait for more.

Please continue this story, I love it. I always loved the movie The Breakfast Club but I felt bad that Brian never had anyone and your story is already just perfect _