Reviews for IS and Sekirei Brave new world
SetsunaRay chapter 20 . 46m
Well done. Why this is the most incredible chapter that I've ever read. Minato and Musubi went on a date at the festival was great and spending time together is awesome. Ichika hearing the story of the Sekirei sounds cool. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
DrackNath chapter 20 . 2h
Honne is adorable~
And honestly speaking i really dislike all the IS girls...their reason for chasing the guy is just shallow and full of bs.
I hope he finds someone ti sharing his life with soon ;3
Anyhok nice chapter :3 loved the scene with Musubi and Minato spending time together at the festival and Ichika getting the story of how each Sekirei was winged that was nice :3 Cant wait to see more :3
DemonHunter52 chapter 19 . 7/23
A R&R chapter. Got nothing much to say. Really good chapter. Could have been better if I had known those characters. It's just me blindly imagining the characters. But still a really good chapter. One thing I'll say, Chifuyu did the right thing. They deserved that. Too bad, Ran got away.
Curse of Whimsy chapter 19 . 7/15
Good chapter.

Ichika meeting the Sekirei was just as interesting as I hoped, and you did a really good job of revealing new bits of knowledge piece by piece. Like Ichika deciding to keep his gaze innocent because the girls are off-limits, and Kazehana noting that he doesn't check her out. Quite a few of the Sekirei seem to have figured out Ichika needs a lot more love and affection than he's been getting, and it was heart-warming to see how they slowly reel him into the sibling position.

The IS girls are in for some real shit if they come sniffing around, I can already picture the Sekirei closing ranks around Ichika with thoughts somewhere along the lines of denying any girl who won't treat the latest family member properly. If I was that close to Ichika, no way I'd tolerate girls like that thinking they had any business wanting a relationship with him.

The sparring matches were good as well, good job with showing how they were taking the match seriously, but still in a low-pressure fundamentally friendly sort of way.

Cool to to see more additions to the Sahashi family on the way, but I can't say the get-together with the other Ashikabi interested me all that much.
DrackNath chapter 19 . 7/15
As awesome and great the story is, I am constantly left with a question
Who will Ichika end up with xD
That is all thanks for the awesome chapter :3 very emotional :3
Master Kill712 chapter 19 . 7/15
Great chapter dude. I loved the interaction between the flock and Ichika. It’s gonna be really cool seeing more interactions and see what skills Ichika will pick up. Especially since he will train with Miya and maybe he will pick up a certain scare tactic that helps dismiss a lot of small conflicts. I can just picture it now. The IS girls are bitching about something and Ichika decides to use the scare tactic to shut them up “evil laugh” that will be very fun to see. It’s gonna be interesting seeing Houki there in Shinto. Can’t wait to see more.

P.S. the maid outfits made me chuckle, might humble girls a bit. Then again these girls can’t learn for shit.
P.S.S. With the amount of writing I’ve been doing I might actually try and make a Sea Of Thieves fanfic that I’ve been wanting to make.
P.S.S.S I really need to stop staying up at 3am to read fanfics or watch vids but do that during the day “IPad hits face”...Ow
Gamelover41592 chapter 19 . 7/14
excellent work on this chapter as always and good song and I do hope Houki sees the light
SetsunaRay chapter 19 . 7/14
It’s great that Minato reunite with Ichika. Good interactions between the sole male pilot and the Sekirei characters. I mean, he and Ichika have some catching up to do after not seeing each other for too long. It’s a wonderful idea for the Sekirei family throws a party. Ichika’s having a good time at Maison Izumo. Thanks to the presence of both Miya and Takehito, Seo and Sanada ceases to fight. The party is a lot of fun. I like how Shiina drag Yukari away by the ear. It was so funny.

Did you see the looks of the IS girls’ faces where they’re dressed as maids? Serves them right.

Great chapter. I’m looking forward to the next one after this.
Rider09 chapter 2 . 7/12
Poor Ichika! Love Chifuyu though!
Rider09 chapter 1 . 7/12
What a chaotic first chapter, keep it up pls!
Curse of Whimsy chapter 18 . 6/23
Might have been a breather chapter, but a lot of good things happen.

I think it's pretty awesome how out of the new faces Ichika encounters, Kuu adopts him first as a big brother. Great way to make someone feel welcome.

I'm expecting another confrontation between Ichika and the IS girls soon, and Sekirei might be involved this time so that'll be a ride.

But damn, those girls did not learn a damn thing. Don't get me wrong, I am in no way criticizing your writing because I've met people who just can't see their own mistakes, but damn. It's amazing how someone can instrospect without learning anything at all.

And the brothers finally meet, and damn was that satisfying. Nice and simple between the two of them, but I could just feel the pride in Minato's voice when he finally gets to introduce Ichika to the girls.
Curse of Whimsy chapter 17 . 6/23
Good chapter, it definitely felt like it touched on all the ways that show how far Minato has come since the start of the Sekirei plan.

From lonely to 'it's too hot out for sex', and ending off the chapter with a big old orgy. Setting boundaries, both with his mother and Ichika, standing up for what he wants, you can really feel the growth you've brought to the character.
Master Kill712 chapter 18 . 6/21
Great chapter, I like the interaction between Ichika and some of the Sekirei cast. I loved Ku’s interaction with Ichika and I especially loved the joy from Minato and Ichika of seeing each other again it was a nice tender moment. Well it looks like Ichika’s peace and quiet will probably be interrupted. But hopefully the IS girls get to know Minato instead of relying on bias information.
See you next chapter.

P.S. you can’t get rid of me, especially since this a good story
SetsunaRay chapter 18 . 6/21
Nice chapter.

Looks like the schemes of Houki, and the other IS girls to visit Ichika at his house, like they did in anime, has been burned out. It was clever of Ichika to take the train at night to stay at Maison Izumo for his summer. I can't blame him for what happened at that night he tried to kiss Houki. The Sekirei girls, on the other hand, enjoy their nude glory at the love hotel due to their strong love for their husband in Minato. This is why I like Sekirei better than Infinite Stratos due to the strong relationship between Minato and his Sekirei harem. At long last, Minato reunited with Ichika after all of these years. Those two boys must have been happy with one another.
Gamelover41592 chapter 18 . 6/21
great job on this chapter and nice to see ichika bond with kuu but why are you bashing yukari?
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