Hey pls update and plsss more claire and owen lovey dovey momentssss

Sorry I’m now reviewing and reading this. I’ve been so busy! Ugh. But anyways this was a great chapter. I love the picnic that the family got to have. I like how you included the sibling getting eaten. And I like how sweet and thoughtful it was for Owen to go pick Claire up from work because she’d fallen asleep! And Barry for helping out. I could literally picture everything happening in my head Because of how descriptive u were. Great job girlie! Keep it up!

The family was having a good time. Too bad it got interrupted when Claire learns that the Indominus ate her sibling and it was a long day for her.

Keep up the good work.

I loved their idea of "perks" for any young man or woman who breaks their kid's hearts. Haha! This was great! I really loved that Claire got Hoskins to believe that he was fired! Just what he deserves! Hopefully, that threat will keep him in line for a little bit. Great chapter as always girlie, looking forward to more!

I was wondering when we will see more of that story.

Claire used any means to force Hoskins not to use Nate to have Owen do a field test on the raptors, including a bluff. That shows she would do any means to protect her kids, just like Owen would.

Nicely done there.

Need moree

The family interaction here is great! I love it. Nathan and Mia are a handful but I love them lol

Kids in punishment are sure hard to deal with from what I read here. Nathan and Mia sure got their stubbornness from Claire and cockiness from Owen. Tough combo.

Nicely done there. Keep at it.

Please update soon this is amazing

Great story so far. Interesting view of life on the island with Claire and Owen having kids. This is getting more and more interesting. I wonder what will happen next. Keep up the great work!

Ah the joys of parenting. lol. I'm glad Nathan was found safe! Good chapter!

Awww. This reminded me a bit of your Twilight fics with Derek! I miss him lol. But I'm starting to like Nathan too! lol. Great Chapter Girlie!

Nathan and Mia got grounded big time for Nathan exploring the abandoned Jurassic Park area and Mia keeping it a secret. Owen and Claire sure gave their children a major earful for doing that and punishing them for it.

Good job writing it.

Poor Nathan! Glad they got it all straightened out! Hoskins is such an a** can’t wait to read more

Hoskins is really starting to give Owen and Claire's nerves, manipulating Nathan into thinking such absurd thoughts about his parents. What a jackass. I got a feeling that Claire would go to Masrani about this.

Keep up the good work.