Reviews for Guardian of the Dead
Villiandeku9501 chapter 8 . 8/11
I really, really love this story and I’m getting nervous as it’s been over a year since you last posted that you aren’t continuing so I really hope you do keep going
Villiandeku9501 chapter 5 . 8/10
Hey i noticed this a couple of chapters back but almost always when you bold something the last lines of the text get cut off
Villiandeku9501 chapter 1 . 8/10
I absolutely love the dream sequence, it absolutely reads out perfectly as a foreshadowing and creepy vision that I could easily see in an actual anime. (the only reason not bleach is because they don’t really have moments like that I think) that one sequence made me already want to read more so well done, you got a reader
PsylentFox chapter 8 . 7/9
Truely wanted to say that I enjoyed this story thus far! Need to get that next chapter up and stat! We've finally started to get to the beginning of the story, so this must continue! lol

No rush or worries though. :)

I mourn the loss of Zangetsu but I find myself looking forward to Ikomikidomoe and Ichigo's reactions in the future. I am really hoping for another Compression-Type Bankai from Ikomikidomoe though... I truly loved Tensa Zangetsu because of how subtle it was when compared to everyone else's bankai... so having a Tensa Zangetsu-like first release bankai form would be amazing... or maybe have that be her Shikai release state? As an ode to her predecessor with Ichigo and then her Bankai can be that all encompassing cloud of death and deconstruction?

Possibilities are endless and I look forward to reading it! :) (Now I"m off to read Guardian of the Dead (Old) just to see how much the story changed from its first iteration!)
Gyhfyuyg chapter 8 . 7/8
This story is a really cool concept. This is the first fanfic that has Ichigo wielding Ikomikidomoe. I am also curious about Ophis and Ikomikidomoe’s relationship. I really want to see what happens next. Please continue this fanfic
Warren Valion chapter 8 . 6/5
First things first, I love the story. Actually, I love a lot of what you wrote, including the original GOTD.

And even though I do prefer Ryujin Jakka over Ikomikidomoe, in fact, searching for stories in which Ichigo possessed Ryujin Jakka is why I even found your Fan-Fic portfolio in the first place, I am glad to read just about anything you write because I like your style so much.

And after re-reading both versions of the story and seeing the differences back-to-back, I can say it was really cool to see all the small and big changes in the scenes. And I can't wait to see what where this story will go, once you come back from your hiatus (Hopefully soon!)

Aside from that, I have to ask - do you have a beta-reader? Or at least some type of way of checking over grammar or spelling errors that isn't just a look over by yourself?

I ask this because, during my recent re-reading of all of your works, I have come to see numerous simple errors in the format of your writing.

For example, a lack of capitalization when starting a new quotation, or words that aren't spaced properly, or using an "'s" when you are talking about an object's plurality and not talking about the possession of an object, and a myriad of other small problems.

These small weird mistakes that litter your fics are the only real flaws in your writing, and I feel that getting a beta or even putting your chapters in an app that scans and displays all of your writing errors, like Grammarly for instance, would be extremely beneficial in eliminating said flaw.

Anyway, that's all I wanted to say - thanks for writing so many great fics! Here's to a future where you finish your hiatus soon and get back to writing because I would love to read more.

P.S.: As for your question about you taking on another fic, I wouldn't recommend it. You already have three fics on your shoulders, and unless it's a simple one-shot, taking on more just seems like a bad idea.
Ashkan Dehno chapter 8 . 5/22
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
I'm hungry010 chapter 8 . 4/26
This might just be the greatest Bleach fan fiction that I have ever read
HaywireEagle chapter 3 . 4/13
Meh. Zangetsu or bust for me. Anything else is just a cheap wannabe pretender.
HaywireEagle chapter 2 . 4/13
Ichigo without Zengetsu just doesn't sound right to me. It is a part of him. The other half of his soul so to speak. It is like Naruto not knowing the Rasengan or Shadow Clone Jutsu. Like Superman not being Superman.
The Mountain Peddler chapter 7 . 4/6
Oh my, this new version of the story has been quite good so far. Its been a really good read and I have been enjoying every chapter so far, hope too see more of it and how the story will plat out.
92 is half of 99 chapter 8 . 3/31
I've re-read this fanfic multiple times now and it's so good. It's a much better improvement from the old one and we were just getting into the good part as well, I was excited to see the relationship develop between Koneko and Ichigo as well. Anyhow, keep up the good work and stay safe.
cassianaswindell123 chapter 2 . 3/24
Walking disaster with infinite evolution describes ichigo just as well as the sword lol
Lucifer24195 chapter 8 . 2/29
Man it's a royal shame that you aren't anymore continuing this story... I miss this wonderful plot line and good writing style..
The Mountain Peddler chapter 8 . 2/11
oh me god, this be a good fanfiction, lovn what ya doin with et so far. I hope ta see how Koneko and Ichigo's relationship comes along and how the tension with de Shinto and Devil faction play out. As well as seeing what you put Ikomikidomoe's true name as and how her and Ichigo's relationship also grow.

Questions I have: 1. will there be use of the other Shinto gods such as Raijin, Ryujin and most importantly Izanami? 2. roughly how close to canon will you be with a few of the major events? if that is you include them, and which side will we see more of, the Shinigami's reality or the main reality? 3. Will there be other (anime/manga/manhwa) that you are adding in? and finally 4. Will Genryuusai be a minor character to the fanfiction or will he make a entrance in the 'Other Side'?

Theories I have: 1. I believe that the anonymous and nameless being that saved Ichigo may have been Izanagi. 2. Ichibe is hesitant to tell Ichigo Ikomikidomoe's true name because either they will gain a enormous boost in power or Ikomikidomoe will loose her sanity and return to being a mindless beast hell bent on the destruction of the Soul King once more. 3. Koneko will leave Rias's Peerage as well as maybe Kiba. maybe? and when rather then if Koneko leaves she'll go and be with Ichigo as he is now the closest to her.

This is more of a statement than anything, but your use of Ikomikidomoe is mush better fit than Ryujin Jakka even for me, a big fan of Ichigo with Ryujin Jakka. I am personally that it would not be to bad for Ichigo Inheriting Ryujin from Genryuusai. Like Genryuusai, I reckon Ichigo would become battled hardened after thousands of years of 'life'?; Genryuusai to me, reminds me quite a bit of Ichigo as he was also once both brash and went head first into battle to protect his ideals as well as being a bit cocky. They maybe not exactly mirror images but the are similar in a few ways you know?.

Once again I would Like To tell you how good your fanfic is, in fact one of the best I have read so far. Hope you keep up the good work and hope to see what happens next in the story.
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