I love this! Way too adorable!
Protective Natsu (even with the most silliest of things), so cute!
Gray you are so loved!

Hehehehehe.

Ok, I have mixed feelings towards this story. First of all, I loved Natsu acting all weird, and grocery store thing was really funny. LIKE really funny when Gray said 'We're literally in a grocery store, Natsu.' The Vacuum Cleaner too, like that was so hilarious. I actually laughed out loud. The reason I like the GrayxNatsu fandom is that I like the bickering-love thing so yes, love it when they fight to hide how they really feel hahaha.

Now, for me, the ending was like... too... toooooooo sweet, and a bit out of character... YES I KNOW. I have written stuff out of character myself, but just an advice from me, those idiots are not that sweet, and they would try to hide no matter what their feelings, show it throw action.

Oh, and the story cover! I liked it. It's nice and warm, well done there.

Dear author. Thank you so much for writing, and yes, Gratsu is great and you should write more! Will be waiting.