Reviews for I Am Mr Five
Navarone2013 chapter 9 . 7/26
...damn. That's pretty hardcore. I like his goals, they're very interesting. I'm not sure that they'll work of course, but it gives him something to work towards. I know he said the tsunami was a nightmare, but... you had me enough that I still feel some doubt.
RubberBanana chapter 9 . 7/26
Uhhh. Utterly amazing.
Eviline chapter 9 . 7/26
So evil! Is Luffy going to be his ultimate rival then? Would kind of make me sad. Poor Luffy
The thing about Vibi.. was that foreshadowing about her joining his crew? Isn't she a bit too goodygoody. That weirdo Sky god would be a funny recruit
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 8 . 7/23
I forgot to mention in my last review, I think that Enel from sky island is another person that Mr.5 would have an extremely difficult time defeating, Enel's advanced observation haki of hearing thoughts and whatnot would give him time to prepare in advance if Mr.5 shows up and starts wrecking the place.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/21
Honestly I thought the Islamic jokes were a little lame, like, shock value humor? I mean, not too lame, just a little bit ehhh.
I was surprised when you conceded the fact that it was some bit overused and might be a bit sensitive for others.
I'd personally say to not use the "Allah Akhbar" again. But if you decide to, I won't give a fuck. This protagonist's already murdered, tortured, and raped quite a few people. Being insensitive goes right along with his shitty personality lol.
Anyways, great chapter. I'm so goddamned excited for the next one. Can't wait for Vivi to show up :D
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 9 . 7/22
I'm starting to think that blackbeard and only a few others can deal with the bomu bomu no mi, blackbeard for example can just absorb all of his explosions and then some with his darkness devil fruit, the yami yami no mi, I also hope that Mr.5 being over reliant on his devil fruit comes back to bite him in the ass, take Mr.5's devil fruit away in this story and how strong is he at base strength without it? Not strong at all.
Good story but I honestly do hope that Mr.5 here gets a taste of his own medicine and suffers at the hands of somebody else that's equally as strong if not more, like if he does something to intentionally or unintentionally piss Kaido off or whatever.
intisarannafi351 chapter 1 . 7/22
I am wandering what will happen if V meets boa.
Barbaric Bob chapter 9 . 7/21
would ya look at that
a pirate story with pirates
not glorified adventurers slapping a skull and crossbones on something and screaming FRIENDSHIP
actual BLOODY pirates, why does this blow my mind so?

so when is he going nuclear? or can he go even further? full on big bang? ooo, put a motor on his ship and instead of fuel provide the explosions himself for propulsion?
Jackisser11 chapter 9 . 7/20
Keep up the great work!
Nomadic Chaos chapter 9 . 7/19
I wonder if and when V learns Haki and much more so Armament Haki that he could infuse it into his explosions to further amp up their destructive power. Not to mention his knowing Haki will come in handy for when he has to fight higher tier Pirates like the Big Mom Pirates or God forbid someone like Kaido or Akainu.
slocklin94 chapter 9 . 7/19
Interesting story but I disagree with the idea that the world will somehow become a better place if all he does is cause massive destruction everywhere he goes, he wants to end the age of pirates by giving them an even worse reputation? The World Government will have more credibility than ever if that happens and the only thing this new Mr.5 succeeded in doing is helping out an organization that is technically the cause of all the suffering and corruption in the world. I like an OOC character that's different from canon as much as anybody else does but this just seems irrational to me.
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 9 . 7/19
good philosophy
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15
If you think about it, Arabasta can still manage itself by being a trade center or a rest stop given the toll Grand Line travel causes on ships.

Aaaand now I recall there were underground springs in the island. That old man was digging a well and Crocodile collapsed sand to dump Luffy into an underground river. Maybe there is just no technology or infrestructure to exploit those on the scale necessary for farming?

Also, Crocodile had been using his devil fruit to dry existing wells
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15
Yeahhh... the egyptians werent black.

When you separate and color continents you dont really account for middle grounds or geographical features that affect demographics.

Sure, it is in africa, but is sepparated from the rest of the continent by a desert and just a stonethrow from the mediterranean and relatively well within travel distance of what is now israel.

Most likely egiptians came from nubians that doubled back and managed to make a living on the area. Rather than a black african tribe making its way through the sand and deciding to depict themselves with clearer skin for some reason.

Korea is basically a tiny outgrowth of the chinese landmass but they are not "chinese"
Kulha chapter 9 . 7/16
So, Devil Child in the Devil Pirates?
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