That was incredible ! I love so much your story ! Keep going, there is a french woman who would like to see This story updated ! ;)

I absolutely love this story! It is very well written, with some spelling errors, which can sometimes take away from the story a little. Otherwise, it's wonderful! A good, long read. Thank you for sharing it! Please update soon!

The story is all right. Lots and lots of grammar errors that sometimes make it hard to read and really connect. It started off as a very nice story though but then slowed down considerably.
I'm still curious about where it'll go, but I hope it gets better again in the rhythm and progress of the plot soon

Love this story! I also love how each chapter is long. I appreciate that.
I now realized why i like lucifer and chloe so much is because they are very similar to tony and pepper in the MCU, and i am loving that vibe. Thank you for this

Please continue

I have enjoyed the story so far. You have all of the character voices correct and the plot is proceeding nicely.

There were a couple of negatives for me, though. Scene changes need better definition. Right now, everything blends together and the transitions are quite unnatural when I'm 3-4 words into the transition, realizing that we are someplace else or someone else is talking. The second negative has to do with the editing. There were several missing or misspelled words throughout. A good beta reader would do wonders to help with the flow and to catch most of these errors.

Overall, I like what you have done here and look forward to the rest of the story.

With a story this good, we can’t help but to want it to continue as quickly as you can! Thanks for a GREAT storywaiting but not patientlybut understanding. just finished Ch 10 )

Yea! Great chapteragain!

)Azrael is in the show. She is Ella’s “ghost” from childhood.

Luv the vibe of Trixie with Lucifer. Lucifer n Chloelooking forward with hope.

Very good

Rosary and Hello Kitty! I am cracking at 4:26 in the morning! Thank you for making me picture Lucifer and Trixie at Target. Under normal circumstances he wouldn’t be seen dead there and definitely not doing any mopping, either.

Post Ch 9 after Second/additional post ... I do hope you continue. Would have liked to have seen Trixie reunited with Lucifer. I can do without EveI’m just not a fan of her childishselfish attitudes. Def hope to see Chloe evolve n regain her love n passion for Luciferand for Lucifer to not only have Trixie in his life but Chloe as well. Stay safe.

fantastic story

i really love this

Isn't Lucifer Morningstar supposed to be the youngest?