Reviews for The Men From Onyx
scottusa1 chapter 47 . 8/11
Good chapter. Keep it up. Laters.
Sleeping Knight chapter 47 . 8/11
Damn, that was really savage! I was never a fan of Cordovin, but still. RIP Cordovin.

Spartan time really did come in handy, but apparently wasn't fast enough to kill that bug. I really wish Ben would've used the plasma rifle. That would've probably cut down Tyrian's aura fsster, and burn him.

Fuck, I knew it. Salem is preying on the Dominion's weakness of helping others by drawing them in. I wonder what other Grimm you plan on showing us.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 47 . 8/11
Well Salem causing shit the battle for Aurgus is messy and I still want Jaune's and Pyrrha's reactions
Lord of Moons chapter 47 . 8/11
Well damn, talk about an entrance. Their already down 1 squad member, the local Commander was assassinated in front of them, and they haven't even got to the target yet, nevermind had the trap sprung on them. This is certainly the bloodiest battle so far.
David4796 chapter 47 . 8/11
great chapter
Combine117 chapter 47 . 8/11
Ben pls don't jinx it. The butterflies in my stomach are flying wild.

I have a feeling, that the Dominion won't be hurt, but the ground forces would and that's scary.
HeroHunter2 chapter 46 . 8/10
Hehehehe, Dominion make things go boom
JawsOnYou67 chapter 46 . 8/6
I love this story but I’m confused why the UNSC isn’t making ample use of military drones from atlas to supplement their own lagging forces. Also when can we expect to see them actually start reinforcing and expansion efforts in Menagerie? Cyclopes and Mantis striding over smoldering Grimm corpses as Atlas Knights using UNSC software secure borders and work to free to space for the beligured Faunus?
PaladinSans chapter 46 . 8/2
MOAR PLS
scottusa1 chapter 46 . 8/2
Great chapter. Keep it up. Laters.
Alank2 chapter 46 . 8/1
You made Cordovin true to her character while showing her different side than the one we've seen. Amazing.

I also agree that Colossus looks like her most loved child project. She loves it, loves using it, and you can see her enjoyment from doing so. She is loyal to the people she protects, sometimes short-sighted, but a fighter to the end. Will try to do what's good for Atlas public image, and image in general as we can see here with redirecting Specialists, but she's not an evil, crazy maniac, just a (probably amazing in her prime) mech pilot promoted to a position she should not be in and trying her best.

Also, amazing entrance by the Dominion, now let's see the fireworks in the next chapter!
DarkMastermc chapter 46 . 8/1
Good and NOICE chapter

" Huntsmen and Huntresses of Argus fought with a ferocity and fearlessness that reminded Curie of the Spartans "...ha...haha...HAHAHAHHAHAHABABAAHAHHAA... Please don't disrespect the SPARTANS. In volume 6 in the first episode we saw for the first time average huntsman and they were joke. The ace ops are a joke they are supposed to be the best huntsman on altas but they got defeated by trainee Huntress. Qrow who is a veteran huntsman helped a psychopath to killed someone who is his friend

The Colossus cannot fire all the types of dust at once

A mantis from HALO 4 can easily destroy Paladin
Dasgun chapter 46 . 8/1
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LiquidusSnake chapter 46 . 8/1
How do you like your air superiority? YES.
Sm0keyPanda chapter 46 . 8/1
Oh HELLS yes. Loved this chapter so damn much.
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