I like your writing, but I understand where you're coming from. The story was over before it began when they showed up to east blue as immensely powerful allies of the yonkou. Their only threats at the moment are the admirals. Personally, I think that if time travel occurred it should have brought them back to the beginning of the series. Maybe they know about Haki and have more drive, but are unable to use their future techniques thanks to their current limitations. Maybe they were transferred right after the timeskip instead of current, so gear 4 and others are unknown. It also gets rid of problems like them leaving all of their other friends to their canon fates, such as leaving Brook drifting alone at sea for another ten years.
Thank you for the story

damn... well, it was great while it lasted

Hey Sweety :)

Just read your note and wanted to let you know: Of course I am a little sad that there will be no knew chapters, but if it's what you feel is right, then it is the right decision.

Wish you all the best and hope to read you soon.
Antonia

Noooooooooo!

Seriously damn it all good storys always end up discontinued or forgotten about. The whole point of time travel is to fix shit.

DISCONTIUNED?! NNNOOOOOOOOOO!

NOOOOOOO T.T

Are you still continuing this fanfiction?

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this. I do hope you’ll keep updating.
Thanks
ALD

Awesome.. lookin forward to the next chapter... hopin u havent forgotten

Another thing I don’t get is how come Zoro doesn’t go back far enough to save his first rival, Kuina(did I spell it right)’s life?

I don’t understand why people change the past by letting Luffy go with Shanks... this path makes it so Luffy never meets Ace, or at least meets him at a later date, depending of course if Luffy is the reason why Ace and Sabo survived for so long back then

Now if people had it so Shank’s crew would come back after a small timeskip, set at least after Luffy was abandoned by Garp at Dadan’s bandits hut, to train Luffy, and by extension, his brothers Ace and Sabo, then I would be glad about that because then Ace and Sabo would still have Lu as a bro

Hi
I really enjoyed your story so far. I do hope you continue to update. Thanks
Keep up the AWESOME work

I’m really enjoying this gory so far. Normally I’m not a huge fan of stories where the MC is so brokenly OP but this has been pretty great so far.

You may also want to consider making these chapters a bit longer. Maybe instead of releasing sever small chapters one medium length one would be better. Each chapter so far since the very first one have felt like they were just brief scenes not real chapters. By that I mean it feels like each halter is just one single moment instead of a series of moments. The story gets broken up by these small broken up moments whereas one longer chapter helps with the flow.