if you do post an update here to tell us

Love the story, still feel somewhat indifferent about the way Ike acts but that's just me. Your story and writing were very good and I thought you wrote the relationship very well. looking forward to a sequel!

Wow! This was fantastic! Good job! I loved this story from beginning to end! Keep it up! I’d love to see a follow up with Kana once you’re well rested! Please let me know if you DO decide to do so! This story shall be going on my favorites and you my friend will be followed!

welp I'm glad he stayed, I will always and forever be peeved and angry about how Ike left at the end of Radiant Dawn, so I'm glad he's staying put with Corrin

WHOOHOO! Loved this! SO FREAKING EMOTIONAL! Can’t wait for the last two chapters!

kind of want a chapter of ike and corrin visiting his family with a dragon gate maybe with there kid(s)

What a great chapter

Great chapter! This was fantastic by golly! But I wonder what that one part was about? Where Ike briefly glanced at Yune, along with Ragnell’s lighter weight? Also, what about Corrin’s true origins? Will her relation to Anankos eventually be revealed along with the Awakening Trio? Just wondering. In any case, see ya next update! Looking forward to the final two chapters!

Great chapter! Keep it up! I’ll be sure to take a look later on at the revisions!

a good chapter! also it's "nock" not "knock" when you place an arrow against the bow string.

Whoohoo! Great chapter! Loved it. I’m glad Corrin was able to grieve (even if it was for a moment) for her Mother. I’m guessing the next opponent is Sumeragi, correct? Ooh boy. I’m hoping that he and Ike will fight one another. Or maybe even Ryoma and him. Son vs Father!

However, one thing confused me last chapter. In it, Ike had said Anankos name when he was outside of Valla (at least, I’m assuming he did seeing as the Astral Plane is different from Valla and it was never specified where it was at) and so, he should’ve faded. What’s up with that? Thought I’d bring it up just to be safe.

Great chapter! I enjoyed it! Update again soon!

Amazing chapter! The way Corrin and Ike danced underneath the moonlight and falling cherry blossoms was simply DIVINE! It was SUCH an adorable moment. Great work on that!

Anyhoo, I was wondering, when you mentioned in this chapter that Corrin was wearing a similar dress to Azura’s, is the outfit the one she’s wearing from Heroes when she’s in Valla? Adrift F!Corrin, as they call her? Cause I think it’s a lovely design for her.

I also hope Ike eventually realizes that even he deserves to be happy. The mood was going good, but when Ike had that "knot", it kinda just...stopped short. Like reality kicks in when you’re living your happy fantasy y’know? Poor Ike.

See ya next update!

O...M...G! Loved this chapter! Keep it up and PLEASE update again soon!

Aww! Cute little moment at the end there! I loved it!

I also liked when Corrin and Sakura hugged one another which reminded Ike of him and his sister!

The fanboy moment Odin/Owain had was good too!