That’s was a nice & cute chapter. It was pretty cool that Vesper returned, and her interactions with Kitty seemed about right.

Not gonna lie, I can’t help but picture Arkayna with anime-like expressions as she’s sobbing away with her break up. At any rate, this chapter definitely had an awkward atmosphere, which is appropriate all things considered.

(P.S., Gawayne totally deserved that prank)

yes this is awesome and totally how Zarya would react

That as a nice follow up to the events of the previous chapter. I’m not a bit surprised that all it took was the simple mention of the word “slave” to break Zarya out the spell, given all she endured back in the day.

Definitely didn’t disappoint in the action department. I really liked how this chapter started out with a suspenseful atmosphere, giving more time to process the situation before the action happened. Very well paced.

Also, sorry for the double review if the other ever comes up; for some reason my first review on this chapter is absent.

Definitely didn’t disappoint in the action department. I really liked that it started out with an air of tensity and uncertainty before the action actually started, giving us time to fully process the situation.

Talk about a blast from the past!

This chapter turned out nicely. It was cute in the right moments, yet also emotional in the right moments too.

Would be pretty neat to see how Lynette does with the Undercity Kids.

I love this!

My, my, that was an interesting read.

First off, I really like the characters you came up with to compose the Undercity Kids, they’re all well thought out. I particularly like Kass and her backstory.

Secondly, I rather like that the Queen is still a bit wary having the Undercity Kids in her castle, despite her willingness to help to the best of her ability. After all, trust isn’t just handed out on a silver platter. Of course, it pretty much stands to reason that Zarya would vouch for them, as her family in their own right.

I LOVE ALL OF THESE

That's funny because Katie Griffin who plays Kitty is crazy over cupcakes too!

This is perfection personified

Having more than one chapter in progress at a time... WHY DIDN’T I THINK OF THAT?! That’s a good idea actually, and perhaps I should take that into account with my current project.

Any way this was a really funny chapter. I rather enjoyed Sarren’s stress over the whole thing.

Ahhhh! I love this fanfic!

Love this; Keep writing! Please update soon!