Well that was definitely a good chapter and I loved every second of it. Good job on the chapter.

Well now...this is a cute story that you have here and i honestly would like to see more of it. In response to your opening Authors note though...I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Gardevoir were to act on her feelings for Fen

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I'd say keep it May-only. Ralts could be that mature...ish voice that likes to help out. Or cause mischief. The entire species are empaths. They're all unique.

Nice job so far. Hope you continue :)

Its rare these days to find an actually good story and a compatent writer who can block Farla before things go to hell.

Congrations on being better then 90% of this section.

I hope Ralts not to like picachu in the fact that it doesn’t evolve.

Better author. Story has no Farla review. Deserves the reviews from the less worthy trash.

Why is it always the good ones that are passed up?

doesnt may get torchic later on after ash reach hoenn

A Ralts? You had me at that! :)