Kagura will be badass in this story, right?

Brilliant work. I hope you are going to return soon.

Gosh, your writing skills are phenomenal. I love the pacing of the story, your attention to detail and the characterization is on-spot, at least in my opinion. I'm also really glad, that the relationship progress of Sougo and Kagura is quite slow and subtle which is way more realistic. Anyway, I really hope that you are going to continue soon!

Hi, I just want to say that I love your story and it makes my quarantine happy. I’ve been following her since the first chapters, but I’ve only dared to comment now. At first I thought it would be a simple story that I wasn't going to pay much attention to, but you surprised me a lot with it XD Now I look forward to the next chapter and more Kamui, my favorite character

This. is. AMAZING! I am not the type of person who goes into all the details of the story but simply judges it based on enjoyment so this review might not be of much help but as far as i have read (up to this chapter), i love this story. The plot is amazing, the characters are explained beautifully, the scenes were so descriptive that I could visualize the whole thing and the thing that I like the most is the relationship between Sougo and Kagura. The OkiKagu fanfics that I have read up till now are probably affecting my judgement but this is the best rendition of their relationship that I have seen in fanfics. It was shown SLIGHTLY too lovey dovey in other fanfics for me to believe.
However, there are 2 suggestions that I have about improving your writing skills.
1. The perspective changes too abruptly. I read the narration from the point of view of 1 character and the next sentence I read contains the thoughts of another character, which the former shouldn't possibly know. This... breaks continuity? I don't know how to describe it but it distracts the reader from the story. An easy fix to this would be leaving extra space between the paragraphs. That would better display the shift.
2. Sougo never calls Kagura by her name. The same goes for Abuto and I know that though Kamui asked for Sougo's name, I am pretty sure he still refers to him as the policeman, both in his mind and in his speech. Since the narrative is basically from the perspective of some or the other character, the way to address other characters should be as the narrating character addresses them in their mind.
These are just the things I observed by comparing your work to other books that I have read so they might not be absolute essentials in order to write a good story but I believe they will help.
I hope this was atleast a little bit helpful.

Extremely well written story so far, definitely looking forward to a new chapter!

Ooohhh... interesting...
I cant wait to read the next and then the next and the next chapters ... i hope you update soonnnnn...

*insert praying dorime miku doge here*
AND thus, we were blessed with the umbrella sharing scene between these three idiots.

THANK YOU

Glad to see this story being Updated, with a really long chapter to boot.
There was definitely a lot of foreshadowing going on here, and I love every part of it. We can already picture some of the Future events but can only speculate on how Kamui, Sougo or Kagura Will react. Which makes it all the more difficult to wait until the next updates xD

The part about the dreams they had was really something too. You pictured every one's worries and doubts, curiosity, but also fears.

Thank you again for this chapter, we're really blessed having you around ! And cheer up, It happens to everyone, going into hiatus form this Website or writing stories, but it's always great for coming back better !

Thank you for the update!

I love this can't wait for more~

I am crying. I am crying so hard right now.

You are an amazing writer. That flashbacks in previous chapter? Kamui's thought and feelings? Kamui (almost) killing Kagura? Kagura almost dying? It's perfect and it made me feel so much.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

Me encanto *3*

j'ai tellement hâte maintenant de connaitre la suite! je suis en vacance mais je n'ai pas pu m’empêcher de chercher ta fic pour enfin savoir!

je te souhaite bonne continuation!

I really liked the the part where both kamui and sougo believed kagura died. It gave us quite the look of how they would react which was quite fascinating. Also, this story is giving me loads of sougoxkagura and (more importantly) sibling dynamics of kamui and kagura! Thank you for the update and I look forward for the upcoming chapters!

I'm just I can't even describe how good this is, my god I'm useless